Question

帮我看看这句英文写的对不对？

OL. Ozdal reported *** was observed in one patient (5%) and ***in two patients (10%) in the **** group, and these events resolved in 3rd month visit after leaving the *** group. L Sandfeldt also reported ***** in two patients. However, impotence might be not advert effects of finasteride but a complication of the TURP itself.
主要帮我看看however及后面的对不对?

Answer 1

这个句子问题多多啊。你这句的意思是:很多树每年都被砍掉，目的是导致我们减少防止沙尘暴的能力。so
that表目的，不宜用在此句。cutted应该改成cut.不是这些树每年都被砍，而应该是每年都有很多树被砍。应该改成类似这样的句子:Each
year
lots
of
trees
have
been
cut
down.
As
a
result(Consequently),
our
ability
to
prevent
sandstorm
has
been
weakened.

Answer 2

However,those who are impotance might not be aware of the effect of finasteride, which is a complication of the TURP itself.