Question

【英语翻译】求翻译一段话，可酌情意译。2014年1月7号（或之前）确定采纳答案。

【Tips】1. 求翻译地【有文采些】，不要翻译地太俗（太俗的版本我也能翻）。2. 可酌情意译。3. 我一眼望去发现超过3出语法错误的答案，会直接忽视。

求翻译下面的话：
“他能高效高质地完成学业与工作。让我印象极其深刻的是，他在最忙碌的大二学年，依旧能保持高效率且高质量的学习、工作与比赛。作为橄榄球队的队长，他每天中午与晚上19：00-20:00都要带领校橄榄球队进行训练，每晚20:30-22：00要与辩论队的队友模拟辩论，以准备当年的华东赛区辩论赛；作为校学生会的组织部部长，他抽出了很多时间组织与安排组织部的日常工作与大型活动；参加了校演讲比赛、街舞比赛等，都取得了优异的成绩。此外，他每周六上午会参加定期的志愿者义工活动。尽管课外活动很多、大二学业压力大，他依靠充分利用碎片时间来巩固学习，保持了专业第二名的好成绩。”

非常感谢您的帮助！辛苦了！

Answer 1

人工翻译，请审阅。
He can complete his studies and work in high efficiency and quality. I was extremely impressed that in the busiest sophomore school year, he was still able to maintain his high efficiency and high quality of learning, work and competition. As the captain of the football team, he had to lead the school football team to train with his teammates at 19:00-20:00 every day, and conduct simulant debating with his teammates of debating team at 20:30-22:00 every evening to prepare the Debating Compitation of East-China compitation division sponsored in that year; as the Minister of Organization Department of the Student Union, he took a lot of time to organize and arrange the daily work and large-scale activities of the Organization Department; he also attended the school speech contest, dance competition, etc. and had achieved excellent results. In addition, he participated in the regularly volunteer activities every Saturday morning.Although having a lot of extracurricular activities, and highly pressed sophomore school year's schoolwork, he could rely on taking full use of odd hours to consolidate his learning, and maintain a good professional results ranked second.

追问

感谢亲的回答，辛苦了！能不能麻烦亲再把写错的单词、不恰当的固定搭配和语法小错误改一遍？
我看到一些错误，但是好累，不想改了。
没有人回答了的话，我就用亲的最终版了。
再次谢谢

追答

已修改，应该可以了。由于字数超过，无法发出，没改的地方只好删去。
She can ……. I was extremely impressed that……, she was still able to maintain her high efficiency and quality of learning……. As the captain of the football team, she had to lead the school football team to train with her teammates at 19:00-20:00…… with her teammates of debating team at 20:30-22:00 every evening ……; as the Minister of Organization Department of the Student Union, she took a lot of time to organize and arrange the daily work and large-scale activities ……she also attended the school speech contest, dance competition, etc. and had achieved excellent results. In addition, she participated in the regular volunteer activities every Saturday morning. Although having a lot of extracurricular activities, and highly pressed sophomore school year's schoolwork, she could rely on taking full use of odd hours to consolidate her learning, and maintain a good professional results ranked second.

追问

写错的词不是he。

大神，我很好奇，为什么“ Debating Compitation”、“East-China compitation”、“ taking use of”、“pressed...homework”会是是对的。

追答

对不起，应该是compitition，typing error，
taking use of 应改为making use of
highly pressed宜改为hard-pressed
谢谢指正，共同学习。

Answer 2

"He can complete their studies and work
with high efficiency and high quality. Let me very deep impression is, he in the
busy two year, still can maintain the high efficiency and high quality learning,
work and play. As the captain of the rugby team, he every day at noon and
evening 19:00-20:00 will lead the school football team training, every night
20:30-22:00 and debate team mate to debate, to prepare for the East Division
debate; as Minister of Organization Department of the school students, he pulled
out the daily work and a lot of time and organize large-scale activities
Organization Department; took part in the school speech contest, street dance
competition, have made outstanding achievements. In addition, he will attend
regular weekly at six volunteers in volunteer activities. Although lots of
extra-curricular activities, two academic pressure, he relies on to make full
use of fragmented time to consolidate learning, maintain a professional second
good results."