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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Answer 1

I like music very much, pop songs particularly. Every evening then (改when)I am doing homework and at weekends when I (加am )at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on  my tape recorder.. The fa miliar patterns of notes attracts ( 改attract) me into the colourfull y （改(colourful或colorful) world of music. Now and then I stopped ( 改 stop) to follow the songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asking me to fix my attention to (改on)my homework. She does not like the (去the)pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peaceful music reminds her of their (改her)beautiful life when she was young. It is a truth which( 改that) people of different age (改ages)understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.

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