Question

速求一篇英语作文，高手进！

假如你是马琳，昨天晚上你去参加同学的生日派对，突然肚子很疼。朋友们把你送到医院，经检查是由于喝了太多的冷饮，医生建议你休息一天。请你据此给你的英语老师写一张70词左右的请假条，告诉他你今天不能去上课。
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PS：这是人教新目标英语八年级上册的作文题。
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Dear Mr.Zhang,

Yours,
Ma Lin

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Answer 1

Dear Mr.Zhang,
I'm Ma Lin,I'm so sorry I can't go to school today.Last nigt I went to my classmate's birthday party and drank so much soft drinks.Unfortunately,I had upset stomch.My friends send to the hospital and the doctor suggest me to have a risk.So I ask for one day off.

Yours,
Ma Lin

Answer 2

Dear Mr.Zhang
This is ma lin , I'm very sorry to told you I can not go to school today .Last night ,I went to the brithday party of my classmate ,Suddenly I had pain in my stomach ,my friends took me to the hospital .After doctor looked over carefully ,I ate too much ice cream cause the stomache .the doctor suggested me to have rest ,
so ,I couldn't went to school today .
Yours,
Ma Lin
重在时态！

Answer 3

i'm writting to you for one day off because i'm not feeling good.

the events is i attended a birthday party of my classmate last night,we did have fun at that time,but on the half way of the party,my stomach happened to ache so much that i can't stand.when my friends realized this the send me to hospital at once.

after the doctor has examined,he diagnosed that is the too much cold drinking i took leaded to the trouble.he suggest that i'd better stay at home to recuperate for one day at least.