Question

英语短文改错

last april,a photo show held in our school.
it was of very success! all the photos were taken
by the students themselves.there were all black-and-white
and color photos .presenting our school life.the beautiful of
nature .festival activity and so on.ALL the worlds of arts were
on the show in the reading room on the second floor .erery day,
a larege number of students went to enjoy it and they were suprpising
to find that the pictures were really,wonderful.those which photos
were chosen the best was given unexpected prizese .In short,
this photo show really made our life colorful.

Answer 1

last april,a photo show （was） held in our school.
it was of very（very改为great） success! all the photos were taken
by the students themselves.there were all（all最好去掉） black-and-white
and color photos .presenting our school life.the beautiful（改为beauty） of
nature .festival activity（最好用复数activities） and so on.ALL the worlds of arts were
on the show in the reading room on the second floor .erery day,
a larege number of students went to enjoy it （改为them）and they were suprpising（改为surprised）to find that the pictures were really,wonderful.those which（改为whose） photos
were chosen the best was （改为were）given unexpected prizese（改为prizes） .In short,
this photo show really made our life colorful.
注：those which photos 一句结合翻译，主语应是人（被给与意想不到的奖品），若将which与photos对调则主语为photos，不太合意。
lz自己看吧。

Answer 2

show后加was
去掉of
去掉all
beautiful改为beauty
arts去s
on the show改为showed
surprising改为surprised
which和photos对调
was改为were
made改为makes