Question

帮忙写一篇小作文 急！！

一个夏天的晚上，李军正在巡逻，履行他的职责。突然他听见不远处有人在求救。原来是一个人正在向一个妇女索要钱财，妇女在惊恐害怕下大声呼喊。李军快速跑过来与歹徒搏斗起来，与此同时那名妇女还在大声叫嚷以便引起更多人的注意，在李军的不懈努力下犯人被抓住。李军在表彰大会上得到奖项，人们赞扬李军见义勇为的行为，并呼吁大家都能向他学习。

开头：Li jun used to be a student of our school.He became a policeman after graduation.
One summer night …

请英语好的同志帮忙写一篇作文，中文是我自己写的，可适当改正、发挥，小生在此感激不尽！100字左右。

Answer 1

One summer evening, LiJun on patrol, perform his duties. Suddenly he heard someone in the distance. Turns out to be a person is to a woman and women in panic fear next Shouting. LiJun quickly ran to fight with the criminals, meanwhile the woman also shouted in order to draw more attention, LiJun on the unremitting efforts of the prisoner was caught. LiJun in daniudi got awards, people praise LiJun heroic act, and everyone can learn from him.

Answer 2

A summer evening, Li Jun is on patrol, the discharge of his duties. Suddenly he heard not far from someone for help. Was originally a people are to a woman ask for money, women in the panic fear of the next cry. Li Jun quick run over with criminals fighting together, at the same time the woman still shouting in order to attract more people's attention, in the Li Jun, the tireless efforts of prisoners caught. Li Jun, get prizes at the awards ceremony, people praised Li Jun courageous behavior, and called for everyone to learn from him