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Hello! Everybody. I am glad to meet you all. It's

Hello! Everybody. I am glad to meet you all. It's my pleasure to introduce myself.
My name is Wu Kai gui. l graduated from Kaili No.2 middle school. It's a green school with many trees. l really want to back there again. My hobbies are climbing mountains and riding bikes with friends. It's not only exciting but also good for my health. I'm very internetd in geography. It's my favorite subject. If you have trouble in it, you can ask me for some help. l think my English just so so. I'm really poor in English vocabulary and listening. l think It's our pleasure to have such a good teacher to teach our English. l will seize this opportunity to improve my English. And have a good command of English is one of my goals in my senior high school. Because go aboard to travel is my dream. That l can communicate with foreigners fluently in English. You can imagine how surprise it is if a foreign visitor talk with you in Chinese,isn't it?
Finally. I'm willing to make friends with you. Do you love to make friends with me? Thanks!

英语老师让我们每位同学都用英语写一篇自我介绍，然后上台演讲，这是我写的，大家可以帮我看一下有哪里需要修改的吗

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Hello! Everybody. I am glad to meet you all. I am honored to be here to introduce myself.
My name is Wu Kai gui. l graduated from Kaili No.2 middle school. It's a green school with many trees. I really want to go back there again. My hobbies are climbing mountains and riding bikes with friends. This is not only exciting, but also conducive to my health. I'm very interested in geography. It's my favorite subject. If you have trouble in it, you can ask me for help. l think my English just so so. I'm really poor in English vocabulary and listening. I think that to have such a good teacher to teach us English is our pleasure. l will seize this opportunity to Improve my English level. And have a good English communication skills is one of my goals in my senior high school. Because go aboard to travel is my dream. That l can communicate with foreigners fluently in English. If a foreign tourist in China and you speak in broken English, but you replied in fluent English, can you imagine what the mood of foreign touristsFinally. I'm willing to make friends with you. Do you love to make friends with me? Thanks!
感觉这样改比较好
改了几处：
我很荣幸能够在这里向大家介绍我自己，
I am honored to be here to introduce myself

我真的很想再次回到那里
I really want to go back there again

这不但能令人兴奋，同时也有利于我的健康
This is not only exciting, but also conducive to my health

我对地理非常感兴趣
I'm very interested in geography

你可以向我求助
You can ask me for help

我认为能有这样一个好老师教我们英语是我们的荣幸
I think that to have such a good teacher to teach us English is our pleasure

提高我的英语水平
Improve my English level

英语交流能力
English communication skills

如果一个外国游客在中国与你用蹩脚的汉语说话，你却用流利的英语回答，你能想象那个外国游客的心情么
If a foreign tourist in China and you speak in broken English, but you replied in fluent English, can you imagine what the mood of foreign tourists

望楼主采纳，谢谢啦