Hello! Everybody. I am glad to meet you all. It's
Hello!Everybody.Iamgladtomeetyouall.It'smypleasuretointroducemyself.Mynameisxxx.lgrad...
Hello! Everybody. I am glad to meet you all. It's my pleasure to introduce myself.
My name is xxx. l graduated from xx No.2 middle school. It's a green school with many trees. l really want to back there again. My hobbies are climbing mountains and riding bikes with friends. It's not only exciting but also good for my health. I'm very internetd in geography. It's my favorite subject. If you have trouble in it, you can ask me for some help. l think my English just so so. I'm really poor in English vocabulary and listening. l think It's our pleasure to have such a good teacher to teach our English. l will seize this opportunity to improve my English. And have a good command of English is one of my goals in my senior high school. Because go aboard to travel is my dream. That l can communicate with foreigners fluently in English. You can imagine how surprise it is if a foreign visitor talk with you in Chinese,isn't it?
Finally. I'm willing to make friends with you. Do you love to make friends with me? Thanks!
英语老师让我们写英语自我介绍，然后上台演讲，这是我写的，大家帮忙一下有哪些需要修改的地方？ 展开
My name is xxx. l graduated from xx No.2 middle school. It's a green school with many trees. l really want to back there again. My hobbies are climbing mountains and riding bikes with friends. It's not only exciting but also good for my health. I'm very internetd in geography. It's my favorite subject. If you have trouble in it, you can ask me for some help. l think my English just so so. I'm really poor in English vocabulary and listening. l think It's our pleasure to have such a good teacher to teach our English. l will seize this opportunity to improve my English. And have a good command of English is one of my goals in my senior high school. Because go aboard to travel is my dream. That l can communicate with foreigners fluently in English. You can imagine how surprise it is if a foreign visitor talk with you in Chinese,isn't it?
Finally. I'm willing to make friends with you. Do you love to make friends with me? Thanks!
英语老师让我们写英语自我介绍，然后上台演讲，这是我写的，大家帮忙一下有哪些需要修改的地方？ 展开
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1. It's a green school with many trees. l really want to back there again. →It's a beautiful school with many trees.And l really want to get back there again.
2.I'm very internetd in geography→interested拼错了
3.l think my English just so so.→漏了is ，应该是is just so so
4.And have a good command of English is one of my goals in my senior high school.→应是having a good command of English is one of my goals.后半句不要了吧很奇怪
5.Because go aboard to travel is my dream.→应该是going aboard啊，动词原形不能做主语啊，其实直接traveling aboard就可以了
6.That l can communicate with foreigners fluently in English. →I hope I l can communicate with foreigners fluently in English.
7.You can imagine how surprise it is if a foreign visitor talk with you in Chinese,isn't it?要不不要isn't it，要不把句型改成反义疑问句，而且surprise这个形式也不对
8.Do you love to make friends with me?用would you like to吧，do you love to感觉太过了
2.I'm very internetd in geography→interested拼错了
3.l think my English just so so.→漏了is ，应该是is just so so
4.And have a good command of English is one of my goals in my senior high school.→应是having a good command of English is one of my goals.后半句不要了吧很奇怪
5.Because go aboard to travel is my dream.→应该是going aboard啊，动词原形不能做主语啊，其实直接traveling aboard就可以了
6.That l can communicate with foreigners fluently in English. →I hope I l can communicate with foreigners fluently in English.
7.You can imagine how surprise it is if a foreign visitor talk with you in Chinese,isn't it?要不不要isn't it，要不把句型改成反义疑问句，而且surprise这个形式也不对
8.Do you love to make friends with me?用would you like to吧，do you love to感觉太过了
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It is surprising if a foreign visitor talk with you in Chinese, isn't it?
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