Question

这句话用定语从句翻译为英语该怎么翻译啊？

近来，中国企业家将移动互联网技术与传统自行车结合在一起，发明了一种称为共享单车的商业模式。

Answer 1

Recently, Chinese entrepreneurs develop a business mode named shared biking, which combines the mobile internet technology with tradional bikes.

Answer 2

Recently, Chinese entrepreneurs develop a business mode named shared biking, by combining the mobile internet technology with tradional bikes.

Answer 3

Chinese entrepreneurs recently developed a new business mode called shared biking, which applies mobile Internet technology to traditional bikes.

追答

这里的“结合”实际指技术的应用，所以不宜使用combine…with，用apply…to更贴切

追问

这个能直接拆成前后两个句子吗

追答

可以，只需要把逗号变成句号，然后接In shared biking mobile Internet technology is applied to traditional bikes.或者把in shared biking后置到句末

追问

第二句能把主语改成企业家吗，比如They have invented the commercial mode named bike sharing

追答

因为共享单车只是模式上的创新而非真正意义上的发明，invent这个词用的不妥。另，你说的是第二句还是第一句啊

由于要求用定语从句，第二句主语只能用关系代词作主语，所以不能改成企业家

追问

不是啊我的意思是说，在没有翻译成定语从句的前提下翻译成两句话。

追答

噢，那就简单了，可以是
Chinese entrepreneurs applied mobile Internet technology to the traditional bikes. And they developed a new business mode called shared biking.
或者未必是两个句子，也可以是
Chinese entrepreneurs applied mobile Internet technology to the traditional bikes, and thus developed a new business mode called shared biking.

Answer 4

Chinese businessmen recently invented a commercial moda called Sharing Bikes which combines mobile IT and traditional bikes together .

Answer 5

Recently, Chinese entrepreneurs develop a business mode named shared biking that combing the mobile internet technology with tradional bikes.