Question

英语作文 My 3 Achievements 我的三个成就

这是一篇五段的英语作文
题目主题就是 我的三个成就
第一段是起始段...简要说一下你在高中初中小学这段时期得过的三个成就
第二段第三段第四段分别是介绍成就（包括你获得成就的感想，感觉；别人对你说的话）
最后一段总结段，写这些成就对位来有什么影响。

英文要求
第一段： state three achievements you have accomplished in your life. discuss the importance of your participation in these activeties. highlight the step you took to become involved in these activities.
中间三段：criteria for each achievements, selection process, what someone said to you, what you thought, how you felt.
结尾段： express how you think the skills and abilities you developed through these experiences will help in your future career path.

绝个例子吧...
第一段：我在以前获得了123这三样成就，他们使我丰富了经验之类或让我更加有信心或让我对什么超生了兴趣的话作为开头
中间三段：成就就是普普通通的，不要特恐怖的...类似：我初中数学考试得了很高的成绩（平局分名列前茅），最后复习期间，老师对我们说：“只要你们付出就会有回报。”当我看到了最后的努力结果时，我对自己更加对理科的有信心了！
例子都很简单...考试啊，竞赛啊，游泳啊，运动会啊，绘画围棋比赛获奖啊。不用非说第一或者怎么样，就说不错的成绩就可以。要有别人对你说的话跟自己的感想。三个就好
最后一段：正因为我有123（数学考试成绩优秀）的成就，让我最自己更有信心，对数学有了很大的兴趣爱好，我也决定了以后的学习工作方向朝理科 建筑系方向发展。（写对自己对未来的职业选择有什么影响）

不用写特别的多！谢谢了！！！！
差不多就是这样！！感谢万分！
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Answer 1

This Is Me

My name is Liu Shuaiyi, a smart girl full of sunshine. I was given
such a beautiful name by my parents because they expect that I will have a wonderful trip around the world with knowledge and talent.
“Little girl with great mind ”. I won many honorable titles in the past years though I went to primary school at the age of six. For my positive attitude towards life, caring about the class and collective, I was selected as “Excellent student of Morality, Intelligence and physical Education”,“Excellent Students'Leader”, and “Study model” and “Flagman”.
I have broad—minded ,optimistic character and high comprehensive qualities. By election, I was chosen as the chief of Young Pioneer committee. I participate “School affairs” actively and become the best assistant of the teachers. My hobbies are various and I spend much of my spare time on violin, zither, table tennis, dance, music, painting and calligraphy. Besides my learning, I also made great achievements on my hobbies . I have won the toppest certificates of violin and zither , fourth of table tennis match, third of singing competition in LiaoNing province . With the help of my mother, I have read many classics of Chinese literature, which made me gain “The King of story-teller” of Huludao city. I work as a little journalist for “Fragrant Grassland” programme of Huludao Broadeasting Station. Of course, English is my favourite, for I want to be an international person in the future ,so English is the bridge linking the outside world. I won the first in the National Olympic English Competition.
I am confident that I will work hard and do more contribution to our school in the final year of primary school and make our campus life colorful.
I am warm-hearted and good at communication. Not only do I like watching cartoon movies, but also I like enjoying the sweet music. Let us be friends!