Question

英语达人求翻译

大家好,我叫***,今年11岁了,我是一个活泼开朗女孩.(中间帮我加个过渡句)我有一个幸福的家庭, 爸妈妈还有我!我的特长是游泳,跳舞,画画,我最喜欢英语和读书.(中间帮我加个过渡句)
你们有梦想吗?反正我是一个有梦想的女孩,我的梦想就是长大后当一个慈善家一个大老板,给贫苦儿童和需要帮助的人捐助.如果可以的话,我肯定不会把赚来的钱花在自己的身上,我会帮山区建学校!除了这些,我还要把一些钱拿来孝顺父母!最后给你们献上一段诗歌(是个我自己填) 最后加上:让我们一起紧紧抓住自己的梦想吧
(最后请您帮我加的过渡句帮我打上括号,谢谢)

Answer 1

我来看看----Hello，everyone! My name is XXX, I'm 11 years old, I am an outgoing girl. (And I want to share a secret to you ), I have a happiness family-----my father, my mother and I.( I have many hobbies,) such as swimming,dancing,drawing. English and reading books are my favourite.
Do you have dreams?For me, I 'm a thoughtful girl, I want to be a charitarian , a big boss, then I will help the poor and even donate much more money to them. If I am a big boss and I will make enough money , I do build schools for the children in the mountain, Of course, I am going to give some money to my parents.
At last, I'd like to share a poem to everybody which (written) by myself. I hope that we can hold our dreams together forever.
(不理解的，问我）

Answer 2

圣灵2 2014年03月20日
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抱歉……“无支持”错误。圣灵2 需要 JB（JAVA语言写成的可重用组件JavaBean ） 引导 和 GS2 (Globe Standard 2，国际物品编码标准体系的二维码) 或者 GS3（三维码） / 详见注释 第2条
手机型号 HTC S / X / Evo 4G .

圣灵2 解锁后再玩，将获得更多的支持, 特性和稳定性。
谢谢!: 迈克…

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说明：
1、游戏名暂译为“圣灵”，具体是什么游戏你自己最清楚。
2、全部意思就是：HTC手机不支持这款游戏，需要安装JB引导文件，并扫描二维码注册。
如果解锁后再玩，将获得更多的支持, 特性和稳定性。

Answer 3

hello,my name is***.I'm 11years old,I'm a lively and cheerful girl.(This is me.)And I have a family,my father and my mother and me!I'm good at swimming,dancing and drawing.I like English and reading best.(Then I will expound my dream) Do you have a dream?Anyway，I‘m a dream girl,My dream is to be a philanthropist and a big boss in the future,To the poor children and donations from the people who need help.If I can I'm sure I won't spend money on their own I'll help mountain area schools!And I will spend some money to Filial piety parents.In the end,presented a poem for you.Let us hold fast to our dream.