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Dear Mary, What is everything going? In your last e-mail you said you will buy a new computer. I am wondering if or not you have already bought one. My parents just decided to send me to the United States to study, but I’m planning to spend my spare time there work with an American family. On one hand, I hope I can earn some pocket moneys and buy my favorite books. On other hand, I think I can improve my English on this way. However, I don’t really understand more about American customs and living habits. Could you please tell me some of the more use elements? Thank you. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 答案 Dear Mary, What is everything going? In your last e-mail you said you will buy a new How would computer. I am wondering if or not you have already bought one. whether My parents just decided to send me to the United States to study, but I’m and planning to spend my spare time there work with an American family. On one hand, working I hope I can earn some pocket moneys and buy my favorite books. On ∧ other money the hand, I think I can improve my English on this way. in However, I don’t really understand more about American customs and living habits. much Could you please tell me some of the more use elements? Thank you. useful I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mary, How is everything going? In your last e-mail you said you would buy a new computer. I am wondering if you have already bought one or not. My parents just decided to send me to the United States to study, but I’m planning to spend my spare time there work with an American family. On one hand, I hope I can earn some pocket money and buy my favorite books. On the other hand, I think I can improve my English in this way. However, I don’t really understand about American customs and living habits. Could you please tell me some of the more useful elements? Thank you. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua

Answer 2

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