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WhenImetadifficultyEveryonewouldmetadifficultyduringhislife.Ihadadifficultyaswell.For...
When I met a difficulty Everyone would met a difficulty during his life. I had a difficulty as well. For exemple,I couldn't work out a maths problem. I wouldn't give up. I thought over and over until I solve it successfully. I did believe ‘where there's a will, there's a way.’Sometimes,I would turn to my teachers and my classmates for help . When I overcame a difficulty, I felt very happy and excited. So if we meet a difficulty, don't give up!
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楼主,这是我修改后的版本,你来看看吧~~我能保证语法不错:
When
I
meet
a
difficulty
Everyone
would
meet
a
difficulty
during
his
life.
I
have
met
a
difficulty
as
well.
For
exemple,once
I
couldn't
work
out
a
maths
problem,
but
I
didn't
give
up.
I
thought
over
and
over,
and
finally,I
solve
it
successfully.
I
do
believe
‘where
there's
a
will,
there's
a
way.’Sometimes,I
would
turn
to
my
teachers
and
my
classmates
for
help
.
When
I
overcame
a
difficulty,
I
felt
very
happy
and
excited.
So
if
we
meet
a
difficulty,
don't
give
up!
挺好的~其实我也没做大改动,还是你的意思吧~~
When
I
meet
a
difficulty
Everyone
would
meet
a
difficulty
during
his
life.
I
have
met
a
difficulty
as
well.
For
exemple,once
I
couldn't
work
out
a
maths
problem,
but
I
didn't
give
up.
I
thought
over
and
over,
and
finally,I
solve
it
successfully.
I
do
believe
‘where
there's
a
will,
there's
a
way.’Sometimes,I
would
turn
to
my
teachers
and
my
classmates
for
help
.
When
I
overcame
a
difficulty,
I
felt
very
happy
and
excited.
So
if
we
meet
a
difficulty,
don't
give
up!
挺好的~其实我也没做大改动,还是你的意思吧~~
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