Question

我写了一篇英语作文，帮我修改一下好吗？ 非常感谢

My View on Friends
Real friends share the same ideals and interests. My friends are very kind. We help each other and advance together. If I make a mistake, my friend will not hesitate to point it out for me. We often play basketball outside. My friend is good at English, but I am poor in it. When I had difficulties, my friend can help me. So my English had improved a lot. I think keep friendship is very necessary. I like my friends.

Answer 1

修改如下：（删去括号内的内容即是修改好的全文）

Real friends share （the same 删掉，既然share,说明不一样，分享）ideals and interests. My friends are very kind. We help each other and make progress (advance 删掉，不好）together. If I make a mistake, they （my friend 重复） will not hesitate to point it out for me. We often play basketball together(outside 不必点明室外，没有意义）. One of my friends （前面friends是复数，这里应点明是一个朋友）is good at English, but I am poor at (固定搭配，不用in)it. With her help, (When I had difficulties, my friend can help me. So 罗嗦，删去)my English has （had 不要，不用过去完成时）improved a lot. I think maintaining (keep 不好，而且作主语要用ing形式）friendship is very necessary. I like my friends.

Answer 2

So my English had improved a lot.
是不是应该改成have improved a lot

I think keep friendship is very necessary
I think keeping friendship is very necessary.

Answer 3

首句改为 Real friend have the same ideal and interest

Answer 4

基本GOOD！

把后半部分的friend单数改成复数，与前文保持一致。

So my English had improved改成：So I improved my English a lot.

I think keep friendship is very necessary改成：I think its necessary to keep friendships.

Answer 5

楼主的文章总的来说是没什么大问题，语法上也是对的，但是我觉得，句子和句子之间是不是用上些and,besides,so这样的连词或者连接性短语会比较好，显得文章比较有条理，不会像无数个句子堆在一起。呵呵，这是我的意见，请参考一下，希望能帮到你