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IWhenIwaslittleboy,Ialwaysaskedmanyendlessandannoyedquestions.Oneday,Iaskedformymomth...
I When I was little boy, I always asked many endless and annoyed questions. One day, I asked for my mom that was beneath the roads. She failed to explaining further by using a statement such as “There were big man-made metal pipes with water in them in order to provide citizen with running water. ” So I convinced that there were oceans under the roads. And what did oceans have in it? Sharks , of course! For half of my childhood , I believed that if there was ever a problem with the roads , those oceans will be opened up , but we would all drown in them and be eaten by sharks. What an interesting thought!
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When I was little boy, I always asked many endless and annoyed questions. （这句annoyed错了，正确的是annoying）
One day, I asked for my mom that was beneath the roads. （for 多余，删掉。that 错了，正确的是what）
She failed to explaining further by using a statement such as “There were big man-made metal pipes with water in them in order to provide citizen with running water. ” （explaining错了，正确的是explain。a statement 也错了，正确的是statements。were 也错了，正确的是are，因为是直接引语。citizen应该是复数形式的）
So I convinced that there were oceans under the roads. （convinced错了，正确的是was convinced）
And what did oceans have in it? （it 错了，正确的是them）
Sharks , of course! For half of my childhood , I believed that if there was ever a problem with the roads , those oceans will be opened up , but we would all drown in them and be eaten by sharks. （half of的of多余，删掉。will 错了，正确的是would。but错了，正确的是and）
What an interesting thought!
满意请采纳。谢谢！
When I was little boy, I always asked many endless and annoyed questions. （这句annoyed错了，正确的是annoying）
One day, I asked for my mom that was beneath the roads. （for 多余，删掉。that 错了，正确的是what）
She failed to explaining further by using a statement such as “There were big man-made metal pipes with water in them in order to provide citizen with running water. ” （explaining错了，正确的是explain。a statement 也错了，正确的是statements。were 也错了，正确的是are，因为是直接引语。citizen应该是复数形式的）
So I convinced that there were oceans under the roads. （convinced错了，正确的是was convinced）
And what did oceans have in it? （it 错了，正确的是them）
Sharks , of course! For half of my childhood , I believed that if there was ever a problem with the roads , those oceans will be opened up , but we would all drown in them and be eaten by sharks. （half of的of多余，删掉。will 错了，正确的是would。but错了，正确的是and）
What an interesting thought!
满意请采纳。谢谢！
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