Question

写英语小作文好的进,帮忙写一篇英语小作文,谢谢!~~~120个单词的(高一的)

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Directions:Write an English composition in over 120 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
旅游是一项非常好的活动，既可以使人们领略美丽的自然风光，又有益于人们的健康．介绍名胜古迹－－西藏．

Answer 1

Tibet

Tibet is in Southwestern China. It is located in high mountains and deep rivers.
It is very great to travel in Tibet.
There are lots of scenic spots in Tibet. The sky is especially blue,much better than anywhere else. And the water is so clean that the visitors are surprised to see it.
Moreover, there are many Tibetans living in the glass land. They are kind-hearted and friendly indeed.
Travelling in Tibet is good for the health of visitors.

这样可以吗？？