Question

请帮忙看看这句话翻译的对不对？如果语法错误，如何改正？

我想把下面这句话翻译成英语

可以设置关机音量的功能已经消除。

我想通过定语从句的形式翻译，是这样翻译的
The function，which the sound volume of Power Off can be set by，has been deleted.

请问上面的翻译有没有语法错误？如果有如何改正？

Answer 1

正确应译为The fuction, which can set the the sound volume of power off, has been deleted.你的翻译是想用非限制定语从句，但是，which作为引导词代替后面从句的成分，而你的句子中主谓宾句子成分都有，不用代替，所以这里的翻译错了。

Answer 2

The function which is set up for adjusting the volume of power off has been deleted.