Question

英语短文改错详细解释。

V．短文改错
I like music very much, pop songs particularly. Every evening then (改when)I am doing homework and at weekends when I (加am )at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder.. The familiar patterns of notes attracts(改attract) me into the colourfully（改(colourful或colorful) world of music. Now and then I stopped(改 stop) to follow the songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asking me to fix my attention to (改on)my homework. She does not like the (去the)pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peaceful music reminds her of their (改her)beautiful life when she was young. It is a truth which(改that) people of different age (改ages)understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music. 求每一处改错的详细解答。

Answer 1

then (改when)这个比较简单，then是然后，怎么都不对啊。

I (加am )at home 原句中没有谓语动词啊，主语是i，所以加am

The familiar patterns of notes attracts(改attract) 这个句子的主语是patterns，是复数啊，所以谓语动词不需要用三人称单数形式

colourfully（改(colourful或colorful) world of music.形容词修饰名词world，副词修饰动词或者形容词。所以必须是形容词形式

Now and then I stopped(改 stop) to follow the songs.now and then是有时候，偶尔的。通篇文章都是用的一般现在是，这里的时间也不是过去，所以不用使用过去式

fix my attention to (改on)my homework。fix …on你可以理解是固定搭配

the (去the)pop music，定冠词如果不是一些特殊情况如最高级、乐器、独一无二等，而是你认为是特指，那么都可以翻译成“那个”，你翻译出来觉得顺嘴就是对的，不顺嘴就是错了。妈妈不喜欢“那个”流行音乐，明显不爽

of their (改her)beautiful life when she was young.their是“他们的”这是很典型的单复数错误

It is a truth which(改that) people of different age (改ages)understand 这是一个主语从句，it是形式主语，而引导词在句子中不做任何成分，所以必须用that引导。different后面必须加可数名词复数