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【2012•石家庄质检】请你修改以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及

【2012•石家庄质检】请你修改以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号【∧】，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线【＼】划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2)只允许修改10处，多者【从第11处起】不计分。
We senior school students do have some growing pains．Take some of my classmate for example，they often feel upset because the expectations from parents，endless homework and the pressure of exams．These serious affect their physical and mental well-being．Therefore，I think about it quite necessary to take measures to relieve the pains．First，that is a good idea to have heart-to-heart talks with our parents，tell them we won’t disappoint them．Meanwhile，it's advisable to spare sonic time to take some exercise beside our devotion to the studies so that we will always feel relaxing and energetic．As long as we were fully prepared，we are sure to achieve great success in my academic performance．[20分]

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