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语法没有错误。但一个句子里既有主语从句又有宾语从句还有定语从句会显得很冗长
你看如果这样修改是否会简洁些
Finally, we must admit that people's changing focus from material to non-material, is another significant and unignorable drive.
你看如果这样修改是否会简洁些
Finally, we must admit that people's changing focus from material to non-material, is another significant and unignorable drive.
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