Question

英语作文纠错 帮忙看下有无很严重的语法,用词错误

At present,social pratice has been play an increasingly important role in our college life.It's nessecary for college students to take part in social pratice
In fact,most of college students are busy to study and pay less attention to social practice.Undoubtely,college students have benefited a lot from social experience that couldn't be learned in textbooks.In addition,college students can not only improve themselves.
In my oppion,I think it's necessary for college students to participant in social practice.The students spend lots of time in playing computer games and shopping on line nowadays.All in all,it's good for college students to take part in social practice.

Answer 1

首先，social pratice has played,这里不需要用被动语态，这里are busy to study, be busy with sth/ be busy doing sth,看你的study是做名词还是动词了，我觉得做名词用，are busy with study and ....会更好。
能够学习到在课本上得不到的东西，我觉得直接用can't be 就可以了，除此之外，学生们还能提高自身，前面有了in addition，就没必要加not only了，not only... but also是不仅。。。如此，单用Not only已经觉得句意不通了。
In my opinion,已经是“在我看来”的意思了，那还加个I think 不是多余吗，你的opinion也拼错了.
学生们有必要去参加社会实践，参加拼错了，那个是名词用的，参与者，动词是participate,但是我觉得貌似用take part in 会更好，还有一点哈，同学，就是我感觉那些连词转折什么的，你好像都是故意加上的，O(∩_∩)O哈哈~别介意哈
望采纳，谢谢

Answer 2

简单纠正一下语法错误，供参考
At present,social pratice has been （playing ）an increasingly important role in our college life.It's nessecary for college students to take part in social pratice
In fact,most of college students are busy（ with their study ）and pay less attention to social practice.Undoubtely,college students have benefited a lot from social experience that couldn't be learned in textbooks.In addition,college students can improve themselves.
In my oppion,I think it's necessary for college students to( be an active participant ) in social practice.The students spend lots of time in playing computer games and shopping on line nowadays.All in all,it's good for college students to take part in social practice.