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Tianjin is one of the four municipalities in China，There are also many natural scenes of beauty as well as great historical events.It has four distinct seasons, from Tianjin like to eat, so very much Tianjin snacks and national well-known，Such as 狗不理 Bun ，and There are many historical events in Tianjin
When the the eight-power allied forces occupation of Tianjin，They built a lot of different house In the small area, including the roof over ，the windows are not the same Now become available for visitors to learn the history of the local tourism.Tianjin has a river, its name is Haihe river,When the Cultural Revolution, many wealthy people in Tianjin in order to prevent the arrest, all of the property are dumped in this river,Two years ago to transform the Haihe River in Tianjin, a large number of treasure dug up from the river,i remember oneday iread the paper,there is a huge luminescent pearl being dug out and the Gold bar is lots of would not have said. In short, Tianjin is a very fun place to welcome you to Tianjin 请帮忙改一下里边的语法错误 我觉得错误不少 请认真改一下 谢谢了 分都给你们了

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Tianjin is one of the four main municipalities in China. There are many beautiful sceneries of nature, and it is a place that's full of important historical events. Tianjin has four distinctive seasons.(我不太明白这句你想说什么，如果说季节的话就是这样） Tianjin is famouse in food. Many snacks are well-known national wide. A representative snack is the steamed bun that is named "gou bu li".
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Now it became available for the visitors to learn about the history of this area and it also helps in the turism field. tianjin has a river named haihe river. When the cultural revolution happend, many wealthy people in tianjin prevented themselves from being arrested by dumping all of their personal properties into this river. In order to transform the haihe, a large number of treasure got dug up from the river two years ago. I remember one day I read the news paper, there was a huge pearl and gold bars being dug out. In short, Tianjin is a fun and welcomed place for every visitor.
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Tianjin is one of the four municipalities in China, with many beautiful sceneries of nature as well as great spots of historical significance.In Tianjin, you can feel four distinct seasons in a year. There are so many Tianjin snacks and specialties which are well-known nationally and internationally，such as Goubuli Bun -- a bun with delicious pork stuffings.

Tianjin also boasts many historic buidings of various architectural styles. When the the eight-power allied forces occupied Tianjin in 19th century，they built a multitude of western style buildings in the small area, including buildings with windows on the roof. Now these buildings are available for tourism, offering a chance for tourists to learn about the history of the city.Haihe river is a waterway running through the city,which was once used as a dumping place for the rich family to throw away their belongings in order to escape being persecuted during the Cultural Revolution (1966-1976). Two years ago, in a dredging project on Haihe River, a large number of treasures dug up from the bottom. I remember one day i read the paper about a huge luminescent pearl with a gold bar being found there. In short, Tianjin is a very a place with a lot fun. Welcome to Tianjin.