Question

帮忙修改一下英语短文

Light music is a simply form to express the music. They can make the romantic environment so that we can feel relax. These musics don’t express some heavy things or serious thing. They just let us enjoy them.
Most of light musics are American musics or English musics. Light music came of England after The First World War. It has reach a top since twenty centuries. However, little by little, New Centuries Music insteaded of light music.But many people like the easy music all the same.
Bandari’s music is a team belongs to Helvetic music company. Bandari’s music is so famous that many people copy their music.
Their music can make people feel the cleanest and the most quitest. The team writes musics always on the mountain or in the forest. These musics haven’t heaviness and haven’t seriousness.
帮忙修改一下文中的错误，还有，如果把这个做成两页的ppt，长度够不够，需不需要加些什么
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Answer 1

Light music is a simpe form to express the emotion. They can produce the romantic environment in which we can feel relax. This kind of music don’t mention some terrible things or serious thing. They just let us enjoy them.
Most of light musics are American musics or English musics. Light music came from England after The First World War. It has reached summit since twenty centuries. However, little by little, brand new Music style,New Century, take the place of light music.But many people like the sofy music all the time.
Bandari is a member of a team which belongs to Helvetic music company. Bandari’s music is so famous that many people copy their music.
Their music can make people feel the peaceful just like our sleep wihtout dream. The team always record their musics on the mountain or in the forest. These musics will calm down both your mind and your soul deep in your heart.

Answer 2

Light music is a simply form to express the music. They can make the romantic environment so that we can feel relax. These musics don’t express some heavy things or serious thing. They just let us enjoy them.
Most of light musics are American musics or English musics. Light music came of England after The First World War. It has reach a top since twenty centuries. However, little by little, New Centuries Music insteaded of light music.But many people like the easy music all the same.
Bandari’s music is a team belongs to Helvetic music company. Bandari’s music is so famous that many people copy their music.
Their music can make people feel the cleanest and the most quiet. The team writes musics always on the mountain or in the forest. These musics haven’t heaviness and haven’t seriousness.
“Helvetic”错了，可我不会改，因为我不知道名字。

Answer 3

第一段：simply-----simple express the music-------express music
make the romantic environment------make a romantic environment
realx-----relaxed musics-------music some-------any thing-----things
第二段：came of-----came from reach------reached twenty centuries------the 20th century
insteaded of ------took place of
第三段：These musics haven't heaviness and haven't seriousness. 这句话未免太口语化了吧，
而且与此段的第一句有重复之嫌。
注意：music 是不可数名词，后面是不能加S的。