Question

批改网实在让我抓狂。 帮忙改英语作文的错

Answer 1

There is a small village in the eastern bank of the

Nile River in Egypt.Most of the buildings are made

of mud.As the village is rich in natural resources,

people are satisfied with their life. They always wear

smiles on their faces.The villige is praised as a happy one

Every year many foreigners come here to hold their

wedding which was called the international

wedding village,On August 8,every year,hundreds of

couples hole colletive weddings here.They

regard the date as a sign of good luck.

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fuck you

Answer 2

楼主试一下need改成needs,因为human是单数。

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我就是从needs改过来的

追答

behavior是名词，换成形容词试试

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改成动词

标点哪个呢

追答

我觉得批改网的系统不够智能，你的behavior norms行为规范是一个固定搭配。
bright后面没标点？