Question

英语翻译改错

有一个国王来到某个偏远的乡间旅行，因为路面崎岖不平，还有很多碎石头，刺是国王的脚又痛又麻。到了王宫后，他下了一道命令，要将国内所有的道路都铺上一层牛皮。他认为这样做，不只是为了他自己，还可造福他的人民，让大家走路不再受刺痛之苦。

但即使杀尽国内所有的牛，也筹措不到足够的牛皮，而所花费的金钱，动用的人力，更不知几何。虽然根本做不到，甚至是愚蠢，但因为是国王的命令，大家也只能摇头叹息。

这时，有一位聪明的仆人大胆向国王谏言：“国王啊，为什么你要劳师动众，牺牲那么多的牛，花费那么多的金钱呢？您保不只用两片小小的牛皮包住您的双脚呢？”。国王听了，大吃一惊，但也当下领悟，于是立刻收回成命，采用这个仆人的建议。

想改变世界，很难；要改变自己则比较容易。与其改变全世界，不如先改变自己---“将自己的双脚包起来”。当自己改变以后，眼中的世界自然也就跟着改变了。

下面英文是我对上面小故事的翻译

Want to change the world.first change ourself
A King travel to a remote country.The road is rugged and there are a lot of gravel,let the King's feet very pains and anesthesia.So he command in domestic that covered all the road with cow leather.He believes that the benefit is not only for himself but also for all the people,because everyone will never put up with the pains when we walk outside.
But even kill all the cattle in the country,we are not geting enough leather,and also it will waste manpower and money.Although it is impossible,even very foolish,but because this is the King's command,they can only shake their heads.
A clever servant boldly put forward suggestions to the king:"king ah! why do you want a pure scrifice so many head of cattle,waste manpower and money? why do not just use two small pieces of leather bag your feet?"
The King immediately understand, withdraw its command, and adopt the servant's advice.
It is so difficult to change the world,but changing ourselves is very easy.Not want to change all the world,
but to fix ourselves--only would wrap feet up.your world will change in your eyes after shift youselves.

麻烦英语大虾挑下翻译当中的刺！谢谢。

Answer 1

应该用过去时

A King traveled to a remote country.The road was rugged and there were a lot of gravels which made the King's feet painful and tingling.So he commanded after returning to the royal palace that all the road should be covered with leather.He believed that this would benefit not only himself but also all the people,because everyone would never suffer the pain while walking outside.

But even after he killed all the cattles in the country,he was not able to get enough leather. And also, the labor power and money were wasted. Although the command of King was impossible,even foolish,people could do nothing but shake their heads and sigh.

A clever servant boldly put forward suggestions to the king:"My king! Why do you want to scrifice so many cattles, waste manpower and money? why don't you just use two small pieces of leather to wrap your feet?"
The King immediately understood, withdrew his command, and adopted the servant's advice.
It is so difficult to change the world,but changing ourselves is very easy. Do not always wish to change the whole world, but try to alter ourselves--just wrap our feet up.Your world will change in your eyes after you put yourselves in a different position.

几乎每句都有改动，有些句子是意译的,语句保证通顺

Answer 2

第一句：travel加s :travels

Answer 3

正文是：
There was a king who came to a remote rural travel, because the pavement rugged, still have a lot of broken stones, the king's feet and pain and flax. After the king, he came down a command to domestic all roads are covered with a layer of cowhide. He thinks to do so, not only for his own benefit, still can make you his people, no longer walk sting.

But even if all the destruction of cattle, and raise the cowhide, but not enough money to spend, the use of manpower, more know geometry. Although do not, even is stupid, but because it is the king's command, you can only shook his head.

Answer 4

There was a king who came to a remote rural travel, because the pavement rugged, still have a lot of broken stones, the king's feet and pain and flax. After the king, he came down a command to domestic all roads are covered with a layer of cowhide. He thinks to do so, not only for his own benefit, still can make you his people, no longer walk sting.

But even if all the destruction of cattle, and raise the cowhide, but not enough money to spend, the use of manpower, more know geometry. Although do not, even is stupid, but because it is the king's command, you can only shook his head.

Then, a wise servant to renounce bold king: "o king, why do you want to LaoShiDongZhong, sacrificing so many cows, spending so much money? You not only the two small leather cover your feet?" . The king was present, but also understand and retreat, using the servant suggestion.

Want to change the world, hard, Change is comparatively easy. And change the world, not to change myself - "will be wrapped his feet." When his eyes after changing the nature will change accordingly.