Question

英语翻译改错。

从星期一开始我每天熬夜写论文,到十二点才睡。这个周末我得补补觉了。From Monday,I started staying up night to write articles until 12 o'clock. I need to catch up on some sleep this weekend.
一些年轻女性为了保持身材苗条，强迫自己节食。Some young females put pressure on themselves to going on a diet for the purpose of staying slim figure.
这些工人决定进行罢工，以施压取得更好的工作条件。These workers decided to go on strike in order to push for better working conditon.
这个年轻人正处于人生发展的关键时刻，他不能决定是继续学业还是找工作。The young man is standing at a crossroads,for he can't decide whether to continue his degree or find jobs.
现在，越来越多的人愿意花一大笔钱去国外旅行。Nowadays,more and more people would like to go on a trip abroad at a great expense.
燃烧煤炭获得能源会加重环境污染。除此之外，在煤矿工作非常危险。Burning coal to get energy produces lots of environmental pollution.On top of this, it is dangerous to work in coal mine.
近来，这一可怕的交通事故成为重要新闻，为人们敲响了警钟。Recently,the horrible accident made the headlines, setting alarm bells ringing.
想出一个系统化的方法来实施该计划是我们在座每一个人的责任。It is the responsibility of everyone present to come up with systematic way to put the plan into practice.

Answer 1

从星期一开始，我每天熬夜写论文，到十二点才睡。这个周末我得补补觉了。
I have been staying up past midnight to write my paper every night since Monday. I have to catch up on some sleep this weekend.

一些年轻女性为了保持身材苗条，强迫自己节食。
Some young women push themselves on diet just to keep fit.

这些工人决定进行罢工，以施压取得更好的工作条件。
These workers determine to go on strike, putting pressure on getting better working conditions.

这个年轻人正处于人生发展的关键时刻，他不能决定是继续学业还是找工作。
This young man is now at a crossroad of his personal development, he cannot decide whether to continue his studies or find a job.

现在，越来越多的人愿意花一大笔钱去国外旅行。
Nowadays, more and more people are willing to spend a handsome amount of money on travelling abroad for leisure.

燃烧煤炭获得能源会加重环境污染。除此之外，在煤矿工作非常危险。
Using coal to produce energy will result in further environmental pollution. Besides, coal mining is extremely dangerous.

近来，这一可怕的交通事故成为重要新闻，为人们敲响了警钟。
After this major tragic traffic accident has been heavily covered in the news, it has alarmed many people recently.

想出一个系统化的方法来实施该计划是我们在座每一个人的责任。
Everyone of us here should do our due diligence of coming up with a systematic approach for the implementation of this plan.

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