Question

短文改错

Last week I went to a movie,which was very touched.It was a sad movieabout mother and her son.When the child was a little boy,his mother was such poor that she had to send him to a rich manwho had none child.The boy received a very good education and twenty years late he became a doctor.In his hospital,he had a patient,which is an old lady.He didn't care too much about him, for she could hardly afford the medical care.One evening,the lady died of a serious illness quiet,and on her bed the doctor fonund a letter,on which he discovered the truth and felt the love of a great mother.He had wanted to call her mother,but it was too late.
Everybody in the theatre was moved.
共十处错误，帮忙看哈，谢啦！！

Answer 1

更正在括号处注明！答案和楼上不同。
Several
days
(before改成aog),
a
few
of
my
(friend改成friends)
and
I
went
on
a
picnic
on
the
beach
of
the
Jialing
River.
It
(is改成was)
about
five
miles
(去掉far
或
把far改成away)
from
the
city.
We
arrived
(加入at)
that
place
in
the
morning.
Most
of
us
(go改成went)
swimming
immediately.
While
in
the
water,
we
played
an
interesting
game.Those
(which改成who)
were
on
the
beach
had
some
other
(activity改成activities).
Some
of
them
even
sang
and
danced
(happy改成happily).
There
were
still
others
who
were
interested
in
nothing,
except
(picked改成picking)
up
beautiful
stones.
In
the
evening,
we
returned
home.
What
a
happy
day
it
was!
注：如果只是九处
错误
，则第三个更正is改成was可以不改。

Answer 2

更正在括号处标明！不排除楼主个别打字有误。
When
you
are
traveling
(去掉in)
abroad,
it
is
important
to
follow
the
customs
of
the
country
(去掉where
或
把where变成which/that)
you
are
visiting.
If
you
are
invited
to
(加入a)
home
in
Britain,
here
is
(some)
advice.
As
soon
as
you
are
invited,
it
is
good
manners
to
refuse
or
accept
the
invitation,
either
by
writing
(or)
by
telephone.
When
you
go
to
the
party,
it
is
polite
to
arrive
(去掉at)
on
time.
It
is
good
manners
to
shake
hands
(with)
your
host
and
(every/each)
guest.
You
can
take
a
present
if
you
like,
(possibly)
a
bottle
of
wine,
a
box
of
chocolates
or
some
flowers.
However,
it
(is)
not
bad
manners
to
take
nothing.
It
is
not
polite
to
stay
too
late
(until)
the
other
guests
have
gone,
of
course.

Answer 3

保证准确率！
1.
a改成an
2.
to改成for
3.
can改成could
4.
heart和practising中间加入into
5.
无错
6.
tiring改成tired
7.
listen改成listening
8.
skillul改成skillfully
9.
去掉even
怎么只有九行？楼主是不是漏打了东西？
我记得做过这题，还有一行是：no
one
can
easily
succeed
without
hard
work
and
experiencing
difficulty.
这一行更正是：and改成or
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Answer 4

看看吧。。。应该没有错了。。别忘给分。。。最好能加点分。。。
When
I
was
a
little
children
(children
->
child),school
was
a
beautiful
garden
to
me.To
my
eyes,all
the
things
(To
my
eyes
->
In
my
eyes)
in
school
were
wonderful.Now
I
was
still
(was
->
am)
studying
at
the
school-a
senior
middle
school.
(at
the
school
->
at
school)
Every
morning
I
get
up
much
early.
On
my
way
(much
->
very)
to
school,the
risen
sun
greets
me
with
a
smile.(risen
->
rising)
In
class,I
enjoy
reading
the
texts
and
listening
the
teachers.(listening
the
teachers
->
listening
to
the
teachers)
In
the
evening,I
do
exercises
with
the
light,like
a
farmer
working
hard
in
(light
->
delight)
his
field,expecting
a
well
harvest.
(well
->
good)

Answer 5

修改如下
Ann
is
my
first
friend
in
my
school
life.She
has
a
pretty
face
with
clear
eyes.She
has
straight
black
hair.SO,she
looks
very
kind.
One
day,I
went
home
after
school
with
her.Suddenly
an
old
man
tumbled
in
the
middle
of
the
square.But,nobody
helped
him.It
made
me
angry.
At
that
time,Ann
walked
up
to
the
old
man
and
helped
him
up.I
feel
having
a
friend
like
Ann
is
my
pride!
I
think
Ann
is
my
example.I
need
to
help
some
difficult
people.
I
love
Ann,she
is
a
very
kind
girl
and
she
tells
me
what
should
we
do.
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