Question

急！！！英语短文改错……

Li Ling is the only one of the student in our class who have ever been to England。Last summer she was lucky enough to be sent there to study for three months。When he arrived in England by plane，she was picking up at the airport by the Johnson family，she would live with for the next few months。The family did everything they could to make Li Ling to feel at home。Li Ling began her study abroad at a middle school，where she met friends from all over world。She made fully use of every minute to practise her spoken English and was better thought of by all the people around her。

Answer 1

以一个句号为一句进行分析，注意我分析问题的方法：

Li Ling is the only one of the student in our class who have ever been to England。（去掉of the，have改成has，因为who指的就是Li Ling，一个人，单数）Last summer she was lucky enough to be sent there to study for three months。（本句不错）When he arrived in England by plane，she was picking up at the airport by the Johnson family，she would live with for the next few months。（he应该改成she,Li Ling 是女的，一致都是用的是she。picking改成picked,是被动语态。中间的逗号去掉或者改成who或whom,因为逗号后面实际上是前面the Johnson family的定语从句）The family did everything they could to make Li Ling to feel at home。（去掉to feel中的to,make后面的宾补只能用动词原形）Li Ling began her study abroad at a middle school，where she met friends from all over world。（本句不错）She made fully use of every minute to practise her spoken English and was better thought of by all the people around her。（本句made fully use of中的fully改成full，是固定词组make full use of。Better改成well或者highly，因为没有和其他比较，也就是说没有比较对象，仅仅说周围的人认为她好,所以不应该用比较级）

Answer 2

1.the only one of the student in our class who have ever been to England
改为： the only student in our class who has ever been to English
原因： one of the students 其中之一， 不能和 only搭配
Liling单数， 用： has been to 表示：曾经去过某地

2 she was picking up
改为： she was picked up 被动语态： be + 过去分词

3 she would live with for the next few months
改为： because she would live with them for the next few nonths.
原因： live with sb. 和某人住在一起

4 make Li Ling to feel
改为： make Li Ling feel ( make sb. do sth. 使某人做某事）

Answer 3

修改后：
Li Lingo is the only one of all the students in our class who has ever been to England。Last summer she was lucky enough to be sent there to study for three months.After she arrived in England by plane,she was picked up at the airport by the Johnson family whom she would live with for the next few months.The family did everything they could to make Li Ling feel at home.Li Ling began her study abroad at a middle school where she met friends from all over the world .She made full use of every miniute to practice her spoken English and was highly thought of by all the people around her.
ps:
of 后加all
student加复数 students
he 改为 she
picking 改为 picked 被动语态
family 后去掉逗号加whom
to 去掉
school 后的逗号去掉
fully改为full
better 改为highly

Answer 4

Li Ling is the only one of the students（复数） in our class who has（单数） ever been to England。Last summer she was lucky enough to be sent there to study （for去掉） three months。When she（主语一致） arrived in England by plane，she was picked （被动）up at the airport by the Johnson family，（加whom）she would live with for the next few months。The family did everything they could to make Li Ling （to去掉） feel at home。Li Ling began her study abroad at a middle school，where she met friends from all over（加the） world。She made full（去ly） use of every minute to practise her spoken English and was well（副词原形） thought of by all the people around her。

Answer 5

Li Ling is the only one of the(1. only one of the -> only) student in our class who have (2. have->has) ever been to England。Last summer she was lucky enough to be sent there to study for three months。When he arrived in England by plane，she was picking (picking -> picked) up at the airport by the Johnson family，(whom) she would live with for the next few months。The family did everything they could to make Li Ling to feel (to feel->feel) at home。Li Ling began her study abroad at (at -> in) a middle school，where she met friends from all over (the) world。She made fully (fully-> full) use of every minute to practise her spoken English and was better (better -> highly) thought of by all the people around her。