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请帮忙翻译汪国真的诗—《思念》，要求忠实原文，充分表达原文思想，语言流畅。
思念
我叮咛你的
你说 不会遗忘
你告诉我的
我也 全都珍藏
对于我们来说
记忆是飘不落的日子
——永远不会发黄
相聚的时候 总是很短
期待的时候 总是很长
岁月的溪水边
捡拾起多少闪亮的诗行
如果你要想念我
就望一望天上那
闪烁的繁星
有我寻觅你的
目——光
"目——光" 翻译成imaginative-------ness ，这不是想象的意思吗，算忠实原文吗？我四级528，但翻译不行，请多多指教！
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Answer 1

Missing
What I told you
You said you would never forget
What you told me
I will also cherish it
For both of us
Memory is the days that can’t be flashed away
Can’t get yellow for ever
The time we get together is always too short
The days we expect are always too long
The bank of life
You can pick up many good sentences and poems
If you miss me
Just glare the flashing stars in the space
There is the sight I look for you

Answer 2

Missing
I urge you
You said cannot forget
You tell me
I also all collect
As for us
The memory is a day which flutters does not fall
- Never can turn yellow
Gathers time very is always short
Anticipation time very is always long
Nearby year mountain stream
Picks line which picks up how many to glisten
If you must think of me
Looks space that
Glitters stars
Has me to search you
Item - light

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Answer 3

Missing
I urge you
You said cannot forget
You tell me
I also all collect
As for us
The memory is a day which flutters does not fall
¨d¨d never can turn yellow
Gathers time very is always short
Anticipation time very is always long
Nearby year mountain stream
Picks line which picks up how many to glisten
If you must think of me
Looks space that
Glitters stars
Has me to search you
Item ¨d¨d light

Answer 4

Missing
I urge you
You said cannot forget
You tell me
I also all collect
As for us
The memory is the day which flutters does not fall
¨d¨d never can turn yellow
Gathers time very is always short
Anticipation time very is always long
Nearby year mountain stream
Picks line which picks up how many to glisten
If you have to think of me
Looks space that
Glitters stars
Has me to search you
Eyes-light

Answer 5

思念 missing
我叮咛你的 what I talk to you
你说 不会遗忘 you say you willnot forget
你告诉我的 what you talk to me
我也 全都珍藏 I'll keep in my mind
对于我们来说 to us
记忆是飘不落的日子 memery is the will not fly
——永远不会发黄 ___never yellow
相聚的时候 总是很短 it's short when we're together
期待的时候 总是很长 missing is long
岁月的溪水边 at the side of dream of day
捡拾起多少闪亮的诗行 pick up the shining poets
如果你要想念我 if you are missing me
就望一望天上那 please look up into the sky
闪烁的繁星 stars are shining
有我寻觅你的 I'm looking for your
目——光sight