Question

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请帮忙翻译汪国真的诗—《思念》，要求忠实原文，充分表达原文思想，语言流畅。
思念
我叮咛你的
你说 不会遗忘
你告诉我的
我也 全都珍藏
对于我们来说
记忆是飘不落的日子
——永远不会发黄
相聚的时候 总是很短
期待的时候 总是很长
岁月的溪水边
捡拾起多少闪亮的诗行
如果你要想念我
就望一望天上那
闪烁的繁星
有我寻觅你的
目——光
"目——光" 翻译成imaginative-------ness ，这不是想象的意思吗，算忠实原文吗？我四级528，但翻译不行，请多多指教！
在线等候。
请尊重他人劳动成果，不要复制。

Answer 1

Remember fondly
I advice repeatedly to yours
You say and can't forget
You tell mine
I am too all to all collect as treasure
For we to say
The memory is a day to float to do not fall
—— can never hair Huang
The time of gathering together is always very short
The expectant time is always very long
The river water side of the years
Collect to rise how much 闪s bright poem line
If you want to think of me
Hope in the sky that
Heavy star of gleaming
Having me looks for yours
Eyes —— light

Answer 2

Miss
I give repeated exhortations you
You say Will not forget
You told me
Even I All collect
To us
Life not falling that memory floats
--Will never turn to be yellow
While meeting It is always very short
While looking forward to It is always very long
By the stream of years
How many glittering hexameters are picked up and is picked up
If you want to miss me
Look at that in the sky
Flashing star in great numbers
I seek you
Eye - -Smooth

Answer 3

Remember fondly
I reiterate yours
You say and can't forget
You tell mine
I also all all collect as treasure
Say for us
The memory is a day that floats not to fall
- Can never deliver Huang
The time of gather together is always very short
The expectant time is always very long
The river water side of the years
Collect to rise how much shining poem go
If you have to think of me
Hope the sky that
Heavy star of the flicker
Have I look for yours
Eyes- light

Answer 4

Remember fondly
I reiterate your
Your saying will not forget
You tell my
I also all collect as treasure
Say for us
The memory is the day which floats not to fall
-Can never deliver Huang
Time of gathering together always very short
Time of expecting always very long
The river water side of years
Start to collect how much shining poem to go
If you have to think of me
Hope a sky that
The heavy star of flicker
Have me to look for your
Eyes-light

Answer 5

Missing
I urge you
You said cannot forget
You tell me
I also all collect
As for us
The memory is a day which flutters does not fall
- Never can turn yellow
Gathers time very is always short
Anticipation time very is always long
Nearby year mountain stream
Picks line which picks up how many to glisten
If you must think of me
Looks space that
Glitters stars
Has me to search you
Item - light