Question

这段英文哪有语病，给看下，谢谢

First, it is a kind of virtue, helping others, even in modern society. We all need someone to help the situation, we are in trouble. Secondly, we can better self help others, because we gain valuable experience and establish self-confidence and service of others. More important is, it makes us feel better about themselves, which make our life and work more comfortable. More importantly, we can make the world a better place to live in it.

Answer 1

也不知道具体是哪个有问题，就是觉得读起来有点怪怪的，就稍修了一下，你看看吧:-)
First, it is a kind of virtue, helping others, even in modern society. We all need someone to help when we are in trouble. Second, we can improve ourselves by helping others, because we gain valuable experience and establish self-confidence and service of others. More important is, it makes us feel better about ourselves, which make our life and work more comfortable. The most important is that we can make the world better to live .

Answer 2

First,helping others. it is a kind of virtue, even in modern society. We all need someone to help in situations such as we are in trouble. Secondly, we can better self help others, because we gain valuable experience and establish self-confidence and service of others. More important , it makes us feel better about ourselves, which make our life more comfortable. and we can make the world a better place to live .
你语病太多了 楼主
Secondly, we can better self help others, 这是什么意思？

Answer 3

楼主，你以后还是别说英语了吧，太伤英语老师的心

Answer 4

不要说英语了。就是中文意思这样表达。也是逻辑混乱的。楼主。不如你把中文贴出来。找人帮你重新写吧