Question

英语大神帮我润色一下这篇作文~

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Answer 1

你的一些用词偏中式英语哦

还有些表达比较奇怪，像最后，为什么要说希望他们接受你的爱。他们是你的父母，你也说了他们为你付出了很多无私的爱，肯定爱你的呀。所以结尾可以表达一下对他们的祝愿，这样比较恰当

Answer 2

I genuinely want to express my thanks to my parents. They educate me about how to learn, how to live, and how to love. I wouldn't be so happy if they are not here.
During my childhood, my father surprisingly found that I have talent and passion in painting. He then discussed with my mother, and reached a consensus to send me to painting major, where I am lucky to develop my interest. Also, in the senior high school time, my parents didn't urge me to study for a good score, but to pursue my own interest, which leads me to my current road. They acknowledged me that love is the most important element in learning something.
I hope my parents can receive my love through this letter.