Question

英语作文我写的对吗？

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Answer 1

Our schoold lauched an anti-waste campaign to help(help可删去，不定式本来就可以当目的状语从句)  raise students'（注意这里有个' 哈，是所有格呢！） awareness of food waste(逻辑不通，应该提高节约食物的意识，可改为food saving） and the consequences of our actions.

后面有点看不清哦！！如果你愿意拍清楚点，或者打字给我，我可以帮你详细修改

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Lessons were desighed and siven to educate students to value food and reduce food loss.A follow-up speech contest was held to futuer peomote the idea. save food，every one has their own responsibility

追答

Lessons were desighed and siven （很明显这里siven是错误的，可能打错了字吧？可以改为“provided”）to educate students to value food and reduce food loss. A follow-up speech contest was held to futuer peomote (打错字了吗？promote才对) the idea.
Save food（这里不对，你应该是想说“节约食物，每个人都有他自己的责任”，可以改为“To save food）， every one has their (every one每个人，指代every one最好用his) own responsibility.
个人小建议：建议背一下作文模板，不用多，在于精。结尾段居然只有一句话，略显突然，可以再添些内容。一定要练练字，不用很好看，但是要端正清晰，练好了最起码加3分！！