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During theNational Day holiday, I went to Xi’an,where is really a very beautiful city. On October 1st, my parentsand I got there by the air. Actually, I was very exciting, because it was myfirst visit in Xi’an.My uncle came to meet us at the airport. How happily I was when I saw him, as Ihaven’t met him for many years.
On October 2nd,they went to the Bell Tower. Luckily, I struckthe old bell or enjoyed a good performance. Then we enjoyed a wonderful dinner.
On October 3rd,we paid visit to the zoo where I made friends with monkeys.
In short, I feelvery happy while visiting Xi’ancity. 展开
During theNational Day holiday, I went to Xi’an,where is really a very beautiful city. On October 1st, my parentsand I got there by the air. Actually, I was very exciting, because it was myfirst visit in Xi’an.My uncle came to meet us at the airport. How happily I was when I saw him, as Ihaven’t met him for many years.
On October 2nd,they went to the Bell Tower. Luckily, I struckthe old bell or enjoyed a good performance. Then we enjoyed a wonderful dinner.
On October 3rd,we paid visit to the zoo where I made friends with monkeys.
In short, I feelvery happy while visiting Xi’ancity. 展开
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During the National Day holiday, I went to Xi’an,【where-which】 is really a very beautiful city. On October 1st, my parents and I got there by 【去掉the】 air. Actually, I was very 【exciting-excited】, because it was my first visit 【in-to】 Xi’an.My uncle came to meet us at the airport. How 【happily-happy】 I was when I saw him, as I haven’t 【met-seen】 him for many years.
On October 2nd,【they-we】 went to the Bell Tower. Luckily, I struck the old bell 【or-and】 enjoyed a good performance. Then we enjoyed a wonderful dinner.
On October 3rd,we paid 【a】visit to the zoo where I made friends with monkeys.
In short, I 【feel-felt】 very happy while visiting Xi’an city.
On October 2nd,【they-we】 went to the Bell Tower. Luckily, I struck the old bell 【or-and】 enjoyed a good performance. Then we enjoyed a wonderful dinner.
On October 3rd,we paid 【a】visit to the zoo where I made friends with monkeys.
In short, I 【feel-felt】 very happy while visiting Xi’an city.
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