Question

帮忙修改一下英语作文，并提供一篇范文，谢谢

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Answer 1

One day my mom told me she wouldn't pick me up to home anymore, so I had to walk home alone. I remembered it was almost 18:00 clock when my final class was over. And it was terribly dark outside which made me incredibly afraid. But I had no chioce. I walked on my way to home carefully, hoping nothing bad would happen. Suddenly, a noise came up. A robber? I thought. However, it was only a small cat hanging out on the street actually. I told myself to calm down and be brave. Soonly I started to run fast and wanted to go home as soon as possible. Ultimately, I came into my house. At the mean time, I realized I must thank my mom for his wise dicision. I learnt how to be brave because of her. That was my wonderful experience.
自己改的 稍微加了点词 祝这位同学学习进步~

追问

谢谢 at the mean time 是什么意思啊？

追答

同时的意思