Question

请帮我改下这篇英语作文，谢谢！

Answer 1

第1句话可以改成 First， he is very kind and gets along well with others.第2行中的care应该加s,因为主语是第3人称单数。第3行中 others后面要加上系动词are,最后一行answer建议改为early reply（早日回复）

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Answer 2

你好，有几处错误，修改并完善了一下，如图所示，希望有帮助！

Answer 3

Firstly，he is kind-hearted and can live in harmony with others. What's more，he always cares for others，and being ready to help others. Besides，he is diligent and studious. That's all. Looking forward to your reply.