Question

几句英语句子修改

按要求改句子,指出改正的原因：
1As far as I am concerned,there are too many people want to achieve a success easily and quickly.
2Many students have the same belief like that student that there is a shortcut to gain knowledge in school.
3 As a student,whether you can achieve a high score in the exam depends on how much efforts you spend on the study.
这三句英文,都有错误的地方,请指出来并改对

Answer 1

1As far as I am concerned,there are too many people who want to achieve a success easily and quickly.

2Many students have the same belief like that there is a shortcut to gain knowledge in school.

3 As a student,whether you can achieve a high score in the exam depends on how much effort you spend on the study.

追问

那头一句,achieve a success easily and quickly中easily and quickly没有错误吗,另外reaching a goal这样写对不对?
谢谢老师解答

追答

副词修饰不定式作不定式的状语 语法没问题
可以reaching a goal