Question

英语短文改错。 谢谢~

I am applying for the position of shop assistant being advertised in today’s Beijing Daily.I am a senior middle school student.My lessons are quite well,but I don’t think it is enough.Last summer,I worked a shop assistant,helping my uncle in Guangzhou selling clothes.Now the summer vacation was coming.As you know it,we students are busy in our study at uaual time .We have a little time to do other things,but want to take a part-time job to get experience.I hope you will let me have the position.May I have a personal interview at your convenient?

短文改错题 请帮忙解答

Answer 1

I am applying for the position of shop assistant (因为shop assistant 是被登广告招募的,而且不是正在被,所以去掉being) advertised in today's Beijing Daily. I am a senior middle school student. My lessons are quite (well改为good,因为well做形容词时只表示身体好), but I don’t think it is enough.
Last summer, I worked (worked在这里不及物,worked as可表示作为什么而工作,所以在这里加入as) a shop assistant, helping my uncle in Guangzhou (这里缺一个谓语,selling是非谓语不符题意,用动词原型sell) clothes.
Now the summer vacation (因为是now,现在的事,用一般现在时,改为is) coming.
As you know (固定搭配,意为"正如你所知道的那样",去掉it), we students are busy (busy in后接动词ing形式,所以这里用be busy with+宾语,表示"忙于",在这里加with) our study at the(at the usual time为固定搭配,这里加the)uaual time. We have (a little和little的区别在于,前者为有一点[肯定],后者为少到几乎没有[否定],从上下文可以看出是没有时间,所以用否定,去掉a) little time to do other things, but want to take a part-time job to get experience.
I hope you will let me have the position. May I have a personal interview at your convenient?(at your convenience为固定搭配,意为在你方便的时候,所以将convenient改为convenience)

Answer 2

改正已在括号处标出！刚好十处错误！

I am applying for the position of shop assistant (去掉being) advertised in today's Beijing Daily. I am a senior middle school student. My lessons are quite (good), but I don’t think it is enough. Last summer, I worked (加入as) a shop assistant, helping my uncle in Guangzhou (sell) clothes. Now the summer vacation (is) coming. As you know (去掉it), we students are busy (with) our study at (加入the) uaual time. We have (去掉a) little time to do other things, but want to take a part-time job to get experience. I hope you will let me have the position. May I have a personal interview at your (convenience)?

对原是我楼下现为我楼上的那位抄袭者的解释笑而不语！
1. 这里缺一个谓语,selling是非谓语不符题意,用动词原型sell？
拜托，这是help sb (to) do sth的固定短语；
2. 因为是now,现在的事,用一般现在时,改为is？
拜托，这是现在进行时表示一般将来时。

Answer 3

第二行去掉senior或者middle school，第三行在worked a...中间加一个as，
第四行把was改成is，把it去掉，we改成our，第五行把little改成few，最后一行把convenient改成convenience.