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速求高中英语短文改错 one day I happened to finding a chatti

速求高中英语短文改错
one day I happened to finding a chatting room on my QQ,there people were chatting in English.I tried to chat with some of them.To my surprised,I found the oral English of some students was good than my. I asked them for advice and they told me to practice more on QQ.But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ.Day by day I learned many useful words and expression.with time going by.I found that he could communicate with some1college students free.

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One day, I happened to find a chatting room on my QQ. There were people chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them(没发现错误). To my surprise, I found the oral English of some students was better than mine.I asked them for advice, and they told me to practice more on QQ. And every day after that I spend one hour to practice my oral English on QQ. Day by day, I learned many useful words and expressions. With time going by, I found that I could communicate with some college students freely.有几句话实在不明白啥意思，首先正常情况下句子是不能用But和And开头的，但是按照这个题的意思，But应该是要换成and, 再一个就是最后一句....实在吐槽不能啊，college students free的意思是不加大学生....（例如不加奶不加糖啥的）我也不知道理解的对不对，好多年不做这种本身就有很多槽点的改错了。望采纳