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# 7

Because the winter is coming, so we don’t
bring the children to outdoor area play

Because the temperature is not appropriate for
children, so we stay in the classroom.

Today the educator prepare an art activity
for the kids. She give each child a cartoon paper and crayons and let them used
crayon to draw whatever they wants. Because there are still developing find
motor skills, so their drawing are still uncontrol, and some of them draw on
the table as well. After finish the activity, we have a circle time, the
educator sing some songs for them, and I found the kids are very happy and
interesing to hear the educator sing. They love singing and imitiating the
educator’s action as well, I think that’s because they are curious, caused they
are still curious anything around them. For today’s lesson, I learn that every
child is unique, they are all different styles.

#8

I have learn so much thing during the past
few weeks

I feel so proud for the educators, because
they are all hard working and have patience for the kids.

They are all very professional, they all
know what to do best for the children.

I can’t wait to be a real professional
educator like that.

For next last few weeks, I’m expecting me
to learn more about how to become morebetter and professional educator.

Answer 1

Because winter is coming, the temperature is not sppropriate for children to play outside, so we stay in the classroom. (两个because...so略显累赘，可以根据逻辑意思合二为一）

Today the educator prepared（过去式） an art activity for the kids. She gave every child a cartoon paper and crayons to draw whatever they want. And it is a little bit out of control, some of them even drew on the tables. After the activity, we had a circle time, the
educator sang some songs for the kids, and I found the kids interested in it and very happy(显示感兴趣然后再是开心）. They love singing and imitiating the educator’s action as well, I think that’s because they are curious about everything around them. From today’s lesson, I learn that every child is unique with their own characteristics (style形容成人会比较好).

#8

I have learn so much things during the past few weeks

I feel so proud for the educators, as (because 不宜出现太多次，尽量找同义词）they are all hard working and patient （这里patient是形容词，跟前面的hard working同一性质，形成并列,当然，have patience 也没错） for the kids.

They are all very professional, know what is the best for the children.

I can’t wait to be a real professional
educator like them.

For the next （next指接下来，last指过去的）few weeks, I’m expecting
to learn more about how to be a better (better本身是比较级，与more重复）and professional educator.

Answer 2

#7.
because winter is coming ,we cannont let the children play outside
because the temperature is low so we have to stay in the classroom .

Today the educator hold an art activity for the kids. She give each child a cartoon paper and some crayons and let them use them draw whatever they want. Because lack of motor skills, their drawing are still uncontroled,and some of them draw on the table.

when the activity is over, we have a circle time, the educator sing for them.the kids are very happy and love to hear the educator's song . They love singing and imitiating the
educator as well, I think that’s because they are curious about everything around them.from the activity . I learn that every child is unique, they are all different .

#8

I have learned so much things during the past few weeks.

I am pround of the educators, because they are all hard- working and patient.

They are all very professional and know what is the best for the children.

I can’t waiting to be a real professional educator like that any more .

For the next few weeks, I expect to learn more about how to be a profenssional educator.

Answer 3

Winter is coming,and we would not
take the children outside to play.

Because the temperature is not appropriate for
children, we decide to stay in the classroom.

Today the teacher has prepared an art activity
for the kids. She gave each child a cartoon paper and crayons and let them use
crayon to draw whatever they want. Because there are still development to find
motor skills, their drawing are still uncontrol, and some of them drew on
the table as well. After finishing the activity, we had a circle time, the
educator sang some songs for them, and I found the kids were very happy and
interesting to hear the educator sing. Loving singing, they imitated the
educator as well. I think that’s why they are curious, which causes the result that they are still curious anything around them. For today’s lesson, I learn that every
child is unique, they are all different .

#8

I have learn so many things during the past
few weeks

I feel so proud of the educators, because
they are all hard-working and have patience for the kids.

They are all very professional and
know what to do best for the children.

I can’t wait to be a real professional
educator like that.

For the next last few weeks, I’m expecting
to learn more about how to become better and more professional educator.

Answer 4

Because the winter is coming, so we don’t
bring the children to outdoor to play

Because the temperature is not appropriate for
children to play, so we stay in the classroom.

Today the educator prepare an art activity for the kids. She gives each child a cartoon paper and crayons and lets them use crayon to draw whatever they want. Because there are still developing to find motor skills, so their drawings are still uncontrolled, and some of them draw on the table as well. After finish the activity, we have a circle time, the educator sings some songs for them, and I find the kids are very happy and interested in hearing the educator’s sound. They love singing and imitate the educator’s action as well, I think that’s because they are still curious about anything around them. For today’s lesson, I learn that every child is unique, they are all in different styles.I learned so many things during the past few weeks
I feel so proud of the educators, because
they are all hard working and have patience for the kids.

They are all very professional, they all
know what is the best for the children.

I can’t wait to be a real professional
educator like them.

For next few weeks, I’m expecting me
to learn more about how to become a better professional educator.