Question

英语短文改错, 急

1. I had a chance to take the MU train in this summer
2. The train was white and whose hear looked like a rocket
3. There had many high seats in the carriage
4. In front of each seat was the small table
5. There was also a screen in the carriage
6. It was showed the speed of the train-200km/h
7. Immediate I took my seat , a train attendant came and gave me a bottle of mineral water and asking if a needed a magazine
8. My journey was over until I could enjoy more
9. I was so happy to experience this modern but comfortable means of transportation
10. With the rapid development of science and technology ， we can hardly imagine advance trains we have in the future

有10处错误, 每句最多2个。有可能1个没有

谢谢了！！！！
说明原因！谢谢！

Answer 1

你好。
1、in summer - summer 动词短语后不能接介词
2、whose - its 是物非人 hear - head 头部非耳蔽洞朵
3、had - were there be句型
4、the-a 非特指
5、right
6、was showed - showed 主动
7、Immediate - As soos as或Immediately after 体会上下文
asking - asked 时态保持一致
if a needed中的a - I
8、until - before 表时间短
9、but - and 没有转慎搏折意思
10、imagine advance trains - imagine what advanced trains 表突出,advance没有“先进的、超前的”的意思
we have - we will have 将来时态
建议：多看看英语文章，语感出来了，做什么单选宏孝枯多选完型改错简直小菜一碟。

希望能帮到你

Answer 2

1 in去掉 in是多余的
2 whose改为 its
3 had改为were There are句型的过去式
4 the改为a 此处为泛指，每个座位前都有个桌子用a
5 没错
6 去掉was It是指carriage，它显示了火车的速度，而不是被显示或者展示
7 Immediate改为Immediatly 此处应用其副词形式
8 until改为before
It is …until…指直到…才…如，It was 8 until I got up 直到8点我才起床
9 but改为and 此处不是转折关系而是递进关系
10 imagine后面加兆顷上what ，we和have之间加will 句子意思为很难想罩清象族闷陆未来的火车会有多先进
OK，就这么多，希望能帮到你哈~

Answer 3

让我来帮你细细解答吧！
1. 去掉in
理由：时间名词像month，year，summer，winter 等前面有this，that，last，next等限定词修饰时，不能再带介词。

2.whose改成its
理由：有连词and，说明后面的不是定语从句。当然这样改也可：The train whose head looked like a rocket was white。
（另hear应是head，估计是你自己打错）

3. had 改成were
there be 句型是固定的，“有。。。”的意思。be不能用have或had代替。

4. the改成a
the table特指一张桌子，显然与前面的each seat 不相符。

5. 正确

6. 去掉was
根盯伍据句意，it 也show之间应是主动式

7. immediate改成immediately；asking改为asked，使其与前面的came and gave做并列谓语。

8. until改成before
not。。。until直到凯团或。。。才。。。，该句型前面接瞬间性动词时，要用否定。

9. but改成and
此处是递进关系，而非转折关系。

10. 此处的错误主要是hardly，它是否定意思的，与句意不符，要删去。此外，have前应加will才与时间状语in the future相一致。（advance 应或派是advanced，估计是你打错）

Answer 4

1。我有机会参加今年夏天的动车组列车
2。这列火车是白色的，其看上去像一滚坦听到火箭
3。在许多有座位的车厢高
4。在每个座位前的小桌子
5。还有一个在屏幕上的马车
6。这是表明，列车速度，二○○公里每小时
7。我立即把我的座位，一列火车来了，服务员给了我一瓶矿泉水，并询问是否需要一本杂志1
8。我的旅程结束了，直亩庆到我可以享受更多
9。我很高兴能遇到这家现代而舒适的交通手段
10。随着科学大耐桐技术的迅猛发展，我们很难想像，我们在前进列车将来有
出来了！

Answer 5

1. 去掉in,this/that summer前不用介词 in。
2. whose改成its，有连词and，说明后面的不芦中是定语从句。The train was white and its head looked like a rocket
或者档哗唯去掉and：
The train whose head looked like a rocket was white。
The train was white , whose head looked like a rocket
3. had 改成行培were,there be 句表示“有'.
4. the改成a,非特指。
5. 正确
6. 去掉was，或The speed of the train-200km/h was showed
7. immediate改成immediately， asking改成asked， a改成I
8. until改成before
9. but改成and
10.
With the rapid development of science and technology ， we can hardly imagine advance trains we will have in the future.

Answer 6

1.去掉in,this that next last 等前面一般省去介词
2.whose 改为its,有连词and句子就不是定语从备嫌句，不能用森败关系代词。
如用whose前面需去掉and,加逗号
hear是否改为head ?
3.had 改为were,there be 表示某处有或存在某物，不与have 混用，
have 表示某人拥有某物
4.the 改为a,每个座位前有一张小桌子，a 表示类指，the 表示特指
“这张小桌子”
5.无错
6.去掉was,it(the screen) showed the speed of the train,句中it
与showed 是主动关系，was showed 表被动
7.Immediate改为 Immediately,意思是“一……就”.相同的表达还
有instantly directly.用于引导时间状语从句，相当于“as soon as'此滚颤
另外asking 改为asked,与came 和 gave 是并列谓语，如用asking表伴随
需去掉and,前加逗号,
8.until 改为before，句型是：sb do sth before sb do another thing.
汉译为：不等后者做某事前者就做了某事，或：后者还没来得及做某事
前者就做了某事。这句话意思是：我还没来得及欣赏更多旅行就结束了，
不等我欣赏更多旅行就结束了，在欣赏更多之前旅行就结束了，表示遗憾。
例如：The boss blamed me before I explained the matter.我还没
解释老板就责备了我。The waitor served my dishes before I sat down.
我还没坐下服务员就上了菜
9.but改为 and，并列关系
10.advance 改为advanced，advanced 与developed一样，表示"先进的"
advanced 前加 what，what advanced trains we( will) have in
the future,what 做这个宾语从句的宾语，we (will) have what
advanced trains in the future