Question

求解答英语改错，谢谢在线等

Answer 1

供参考
删去括弧内字

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I like watching birds. I chose (choose) this hobby (bobby) years (yesrs)
ago because I like birds and enjoy being close to the nature。
改后的时态控制也不好，但还是可以接受

Bird watching is a good hobby and (so) it is not very expensive.
这里没有用so并不适当

As a beginner , all you need is curiosity and a notebook 。(，)
When (when) you become curious about it , you may want
to buy (bbuy) more books about birds and a better telescope, with no need
of special skills (not special skills are needed).

And (but) it helps if you (i) join a bird watching club(.) You (they) can
learn (teach) from it when and where to watch birds and what to watch about
(watch) them.
(1) 原文不要一时用 I ，之后又用you
(2) they这个代名词来指club不太好
所以用了you can learn from it
it 指club

You (you) will also be taught about geography and the weather.
If (if) you want to become a bird watcher , I strongly (strong) suggest you try to
find a bird watching club, and it (they) will help you get started (start).
Good (good) luck.

一点意见
减少标点符号的错误
原文的错处便会少了许多

Answer 2

你这拍的太模糊了吧，都看不清。