Question

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The weather is nice!Sam intended to visit zoo,it's not far from his home,so he走着with sang happy songs.On the crossroad,Sam saw a tiger in?on? the tree.It's really a small and beatiful tiger,but it's look like 它was in trouble.Sam went back and called policeman.很快，the policeman was arrived,and the tiger was go to 森林with the help of policeman.Although didn't go to zoo,but Sam was happy because of the beatiful small tiger.
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Answer 1

Nice weather!Sam was intended to visit zoo,which is not far from his home.So he walked with singing happy songs.On the crossroad,Sam saw a tiger on the tree.It's really a small and beatiful tiger,but it seemed that it was in trouble.Sam went back and called policeman.Soon，the policeman arrived,and the tiger was saved.Although he had not visited the zoo,Sam was happy because of the beatiful small tiger.
修改了一楼的一些明显的语法错误。
比如时态问题（某些过去式和完成时），Although 和 but不能同时出现等问题。
希望能对你有帮助。
若有问题请交流。谢谢。

Answer 2

The weather is nice!Sam was intended to visit zoo,it's not far from his home,so he walked and sang happy songs.On the crossroad,Sam saw a tiger on the tree.It's really a small and beatiful tiger,but it seems that it was in trouble.Sam went back and called policeman.Soon，the policeman was arrived,and the tiger was saved with the help of policeman.Although he didn't go to the zoo,but Sam was happy because of the beatiful small tiger.

根据理解改的，没什么语法问题了，希望对你有帮助

Answer 3

呃~~楼上的，最后一句有although了就不能再加but了。。。楼主这个要注意下。。。

Answer 4

The weather is nice!Sam intended to visit zoo,it's not far from his home,so he walk with songs.On the crossroad,Sam saw a tiger on the tree.It's really a small and beatiful tiger,but it's look like in trouble.Sam went back and called policeman.Soon，the policeman was arrived,and the tiger was go to saved with the help of policeman.Although didn't go to zoo,but Sam was happy because of the beatiful small tiger.