Question

求大神来帮我改改这篇英语作文

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Answer 1

With the pace of modern life increasing,many people often move to a new city or even a new country where they want to live.Some people dont't think it is a good thing for their friendship,because they think if you move to a new city you will lose the contact with your old friends because of the long distance.
However many people disagree with that point nowadays.They think along with the development of(words lost? economy?),the modern technology is becoming more and more mature.Such as the technology of video-chat has been brought into our present life.And it help people to solve the problem of contact between long distance in order to keep their friendship.
In my respect,I can't entirely agree with the idea that distance between us will make us losing contact with our old firends.I think if you want to get in touch with your friends,you can do it wherever you can.And living in a new place not only can help you have a different life,but also can give you new friendship.
修改了一些让语句通顺，格式正确，句子完整的地方。文中有漏掉单词的地方记得自己加进去。