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英语翻译帮忙找错！急急急！马上要！加悬赏！！！

找错【都找到了加悬赏】：
Good morning every teacher!
My name is Liu Yun .I’m 14 years old .I’m outgoing .I have many friends .They said I was funny.
As you can see , I’m a little bit heavy .but I don’t think that’s important .It means I have much dynamic to enjoy the life .
About this English summer camp ,on the one hand want to improve my listening and speaking .on the other hand ,I want to stand o my own two feet .I’ll try my best .i hope I can get on well with other students.
I think I’ll experience something different.
I like singing songs and playing the guitar ,and I have been playing erhu for 6 years. But my guitar and erhu are very heavy .so it’s too difficult for me to bring it to here .So now, It ‘s time for my talent show. I’ll sing a song called <如果云知道>

Answer 1

1.第一句话有些别扭，all the teachers我就觉得更好。
2.they say I am funny.
3第三行but大写或者but前用逗号
4dynamic 形容词，应改为名词energy，the life改为my life更好些
5on the one hand ,on the other hand 用法错误。这用于说明两个对立方面的，用于前面说好的方面，后面说不好的方面。on the one hand want to improve my listening and speaking .on the other hand ,I want to stand o my own two feet 可改为 I mainly want to improve my reading and speaking ability,and meanwhile I would like to go on my own feet.
6.第五行I大写
7倒2行so中s大写
8最后一行here前去to

附：对其他回答进行更正
the guitar 中the 不要去
I have much MORE dynamic to enjoy the life .这样改也不对。have后要名词。

Answer 2

老师早上好!
我叫刘云,14岁,很外向。我有很多朋友。他们说我很有趣。
正如你所看到的,我只是有点重,但我不认为这是非常重要的。这意味着我有很多动力享受生活。
关于这个英语夏令营,一方面我想要提高我的听力和口语;在另一方面,我想独立自主一番。我将尽我所能去做到最好,我希望我可以和其他同学相处得很好。
我想我会经历不同的东西。
我喜欢唱歌,弹吉他,我一直拉二胡有六年了。但是我的吉他,二胡是很重的。所以,将它带到这里对我来说太难了。因此现在,是我的才艺表演的时间。我将唱一首歌叫做《如果云知道》

Answer 3

Good morning every teacher!
My name is Liu Yun .I’m 14 years old .I’m an outgoing person and I have many friends.They think me a funny guy.
As you can see , I’m a little fat .but I don’t think it matters beacuse it means I have much dynamic to enjoy life .
for this English summer camp ,on the one hand,I want to improve my listening and speaking skills.on the other hand ,I want to do thinngs by myself.I’ll try my best.i hope I can get on well with other students.
I think I’ll experience something different.
I like singing songs and playing the guitar ,and I have been playing erhu for 6 years. But my guitar and erhu are very heavy .so it’s too difficult for me to bring it here .So now, It is time for my talent show. I’ll sing a song called <如果云知道>

Answer 4

I have much MORE dynamic to enjoy the life .
on the one hand I want to improve my listening and speaking SKILLS.
I want to stand BY my own FEETS.
the guitar 去掉the
to bring it to here去掉to
请一定要给我分数，我真的急需分，没有分了··！！！！！！！谢谢~~~~~~~

Answer 5

they say I am funny.