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还是英语翻译，高手帮忙找找错误，谢谢。

2、这份职位需要经常在国内出差
The position will entail frequent domestic bussiness travel.
3、他们自以为一定会获胜，但结果并非所愿
They flattered themselves that they would win, but the result didn't come up to their expectations.
4、这些工作须按其重要性依次处理
The tasks should be handled in order of precedence.
5、大家一致认为我们必须立即行动，不应该在犹豫不决
The consensus is that we shouldn't hesitate any more, but have to act right away.
6、他们不想让这场战斗升级为全面战争
They don't want the fighting to escalate into a full-scale war.
7、许多伟大的科学家将成功归功于自己的努力工作和同事们的合作。（ascribe）
Many great scientists ascribe their succcess to their own hard work and the cooperation from their colleagues as well.
8、她对人的品格具有女性特有的洞察力
She has a woman's special insight into character.
9、不少广告的音乐和画面给人带来美感，使我们控制不住想买那产品。
We can not help buying the advertised products for the sensuous pleasure from the music and pictures of many ads.
10、因美丽而产生的爱会因美丽的逝去而褪色
Love engendered by beauty will die when beauty fades away.
11、在我们公司，职位和能力是相对应的
In our company, position is commensurate with ability.
12、煤矿爆炸导致20个工人死亡，老板难脱干系
The coal mine exploded, and caused the death of 20 workers.The boss could not shy away from the responsibility.
13、你的儿子被宠坏了，他整天玩电脑游戏，你怎么放任他这样？
Your son has been spoiled. He plays computer games everyday. How can you let it go at that ?
14、涉及到公司改组的事，我们还是要小心
We should tread carefully on the issue of company reorganization.
15、约翰已经不是我们的主管了，这么说吧，他已被解雇。
John is no longer our executive, so to speak,he has been fired.
16、汤姆的哥哥常怂恿他把家里的值钱物品拿去当掉
Tom is often abetted by his brother in pawning the valuable things from home.
17、在我们国家刑罚和罪行相当。
In our country, the punishment is proportioned to the crime.
18、医生警告我饮酒过多的危害性。
The doctor admonished me of the danger of too much drinking.
19、警察局搜集的信息结果与调查不相干。
The information the police department had collected turn out to be impertinent to the inquiry.
20、包裹里的物件与附来的清单不符
The items contained in the parcel don't correspond with those on the list that accompanied it.
21、解雇员工的权力属于董事会
The power to fire an employee resides in the board of directors.
22、唐纳德的求婚完全让她感到吃惊
Donald's proposal of marriage took her completely by surprise.
23、他的恶作剧有点玩过火了，他弟弟被吓哭了。
His mischief went too far, his younger brother was frightened into crying.
24、他遭合伙人遗弃，只好依靠自己。
His partners deserted him, so he were thrown back on his own resources.
25、事故大部分源于他的失职。
The accident was in large part due to his negligence.

Answer 1

没有什么大问题，都写的挺好的，就是几句话有点小问题，以下是我找出来的

4、这些工作须按其重要性依次处理
The tasks should be handled in order of precedence.
The tasks should be handled in the order of precedence. （本人认为加the比较好）

7、许多伟大的科学家将成功归功于自己的努力工作和同事们的合作。（ascribe）
Many great scientists ascribe their succcess to their own hard work and the cooperation from their colleagues as well.
Many great scientists ascribe their success to their own hard work and the cooperation from their colleagues as well. （success拼错了）

13、你的儿子被宠坏了，他整天玩电脑游戏，你怎么放任他这样？
Your son has been spoiled. He plays computer games everyday. How can you let it go at that?
Your son has been spoiled. He plays computer games everyday. How can you let it go like that?

14、涉及到公司改组的事，我们还是要小心
We should tread carefully on the issue of company reorganization.
We should tread carefully on the issue concerning company reorganization.

20、包裹里的物件与附来的清单不符
The items contained in the parcel don't correspond with those on the list that accompanied it.
Items contained in the parcel don't correspond with those on the list that accompanied it.（items没必要加the）

21、解雇员工的权力属于董事会
The power to fire an employee resides in the board of directors.
The power to fire an employee resides in the Board of Directors.（董事会须大写）

24、他遭合伙人遗弃，只好依靠自己。
His partners deserted him, so he were thrown back on his own resources.
His partners deserted him, so he was thrown back on his own resources.