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简单中译英,在线等

如题, 翻译得尽量悲惨深情一点, 好的会追加分数

尊敬的经理：

这是我流着眼泪给你们写的第二封信。我丈夫，45岁，肺癌晚期，手术、化疗以及严重疾病使他度日如年，他每天躺在一间仅有8平米既阴冷又潮湿的房间里，忍受着难以承受的痛苦。
我们现在居住条件极其恶劣，房东把不足70平米的房子用木质隔板隔成了7个房间，房子非常破旧，房顶漏雨，房间多种虫子滋生，经常被虫子叮咬。我们一家3口和其他7人在一起居住，很吵闹，隔壁看电视、打电话、上网、睡觉打酣等一切声音都听的很清楚。他不能休息，不能睡觉，病情急剧加重。
我们迫切需要离开这里，我们通过中介公司、上网找房子，距离医院稍近的地方房租昂贵，我们没有能力负担。
现在我们正承受着人生中巨大的悲哀。他还年轻，他渴望生命，他不想过早地离开他的妻子、孩子、家人， 他在生命的最后时刻感受到你们的温暖。我知道需要房子的人很多，但像我们这样的情况不一定很多。我恳请你们在可能的情况下，能根据我们的实际情况给予最优惠的照顾， 如果你们不能给予我们特别关照，那么也许在他告别这个世界的时候还没有得到房子，这将是他终生的遗憾。我非常感谢你们的帮助，能尽早给房子我们将感激不尽。伸出你们的援助之手帮助我们全家度过人生中最最艰难的时期。
我们期盼着你们能早日为我们解决房子，非常感谢！
不要机译!
很正式的申请表.

Answer 1

尊敬的经理：
Dear manager,

这是我流着眼泪给你们写的第二封信。
This is the second letter that I send to you.I have been writing it with tears in my eyes.
我丈夫，45岁，肺癌晚期，手术、化疗以及严重疾病使他度日如年，他每天躺在一间仅有8平米既阴冷又潮湿的房间里，忍受着难以承受的痛苦。
My 45 years old husband is a poor patient with advanced lung cancer.Operations,the chemotherapy and the serious illness make him feel the days dragging on for years.Everyday,he spends his time lying in a cold wet chamber which is at most 8 square meters big,suffering from the unbearable hardship.
我们现在居住条件极其恶劣，房东把不足70平米的房子用木质隔板隔成了7个房间，房子非常破旧，房顶漏雨，房间多种虫子滋生，经常被虫子叮咬。
Our living condition is extremely poor.The landlord divided the narrowly 70 square meters big house into 7 chambers using the wood clapboards.The house is fairly shabby with a poor roof which can be easily penetrated by a drizzle.The house is also home for many insects which bite us severely.
我们一家3口和其他7人在一起居住，很吵闹，隔壁看电视、打电话、上网、睡觉打酣等一切声音都听的很清楚。
The all 3 members of our family lived with other 7 people.Thus the situation is pretty bad for the sound of watching TV,making phone call,surfing the Internet ,snoring and all other sort of doings are heard clearly by each one of us and our neighbors.Needless to say,it's too noisy to endure.
他不能休息，不能睡觉，病情急剧加重。
What is worse,as a effect of all the above things,my husband couldn't rest or even sleep and therefore his illness is getting more and more severe.
我们迫切需要离开这里，我们通过中介公司、上网找房子，距离医院稍近的地方房租昂贵，我们没有能力负担。
We need to leave here right now!We have tried to find a house near the hostpital by consulting the agency and searching the Internet.But all the ideal ones are far too expensive for us to afford.
现在我们正承受着人生中巨大的悲哀。
Right now,we are enduring the great sorrow in life.
他还年轻，他渴望生命，他不想过早地离开他的妻子、孩子、家人， 他在生命的最后时刻感受到你们的温暖。
My husband is still young and longing for life.Leaving his wife,kids and family members too early is the least thing that he would like to see.He is feeling your warmth in the final moments of his life.
我知道需要房子的人很多，但像我们这样的情况不一定很多。
I do know many people want thier houses,but ones like us couldn't be numerous.
我恳请你们在可能的情况下，能根据我们的实际情况给予最优惠的照顾，
I earnestly request you could give us the best care allowing for our situation if possible.
如果你们不能给予我们特别关照，那么也许在他告别这个世界的时候还没有得到房子，这将是他终生的遗憾。
If you couldn't,than maybe he couldn't get a house when he says good-bye to this world and that will be his lifetime pity.
我非常感谢你们的帮助，能尽早给房子我们将感激不尽。
I really appreciate your help and I will be greatly grateful if you could give us a house as soon as possible.
伸出你们的援助之手帮助我们全家度过人生中最最艰难的时期。
Please extend your hands to help us getting through the most diffcult part of our life.
我们期盼着你们能早日为我们解决房子，非常感谢！
We are all expecting you to settle our house problem early.
Thanks a lot!

绝对手译 希望你能满意

Answer 2

Dear manager:

This is my tears to you to write the second letter. My husband, 45 years old, advanced lung cancer, surgery, chemotherapy, and serious illness to his days feel like years, he lay in a day, only 8 square meters of both cold and humid room, suffer unbearable pain.
We now live in appalling conditions, the landlord put the house less than 70 square meters with a wooden partition separated into seven rooms, the house is very old, the roof leaks, the room a variety of insect breeding, often insect bites. We are a 3 and 7 other people live together, very loud, next door to watch television, telephone, Internet, and all sound asleep playing intoxicated heard clearly. He could not rest, can not sleep, a sharp increase in illness.
We urgently need to leave here, we are through an intermediary company, the Internet looking for an apartment, a place away from the hospital a little close to rent expensive, we can not afford.
Now we are to suffer great sorrow in life. He was still young, he wanted life, he does not want his wife to leave prematurely, children, family members, his last moments in life you feel the warmth. I know that many people need a house, but not necessarily like us much. I ask you, where possible, the actual situation according to our care for the most favorable, if you can not give us special attention, so perhaps when he bid farewell to this world have not been home, it will be his lifelong regret . I am very grateful for your help, as soon as possible to the house we would be grateful. Extend a helping hand to help our family through the far the most difficult period of life.
We look forward to your early settlement house for us, thanks!

Answer 3

这样可以吧
Respect the manager:

This is my tears to your second letter writing. My husband, 45, lung cancer, surgery, chemotherapy and late that he seems like a serious illness, he lay in a only 8 square meters is cold and damp room, endure unbearable pain.
We now living conditions, the landlord to extreme shortage of 70 square meters with wooden clapboard houses became 7 rooms, every house was very old, and the roof leak, room, often by various insect insect bites. We three mouth and other seven people live together, very noisy, watching TV, Internet, sleeping dozen phone, open and all hear clearly. He cannot rest, can't sleep, illness sharply increase.
We urgently need to leave here, we through the intermediary company, looking for a house near the hospital where a distance, we have no ability to rent is expensive.
Now we are under the life of great sorrow. He is young, he lives, he didn't want to leave him prematurely, wife, children, and families, he lives in the last time you felt the warmth. I know many of the house, but we not necessarily like so many. I urge you probably circumstances, can according to the actual situation of our most favorable to take care of, if you don't give us the special care, so maybe in his farewell to the world haven't got the house, this will be his lifelong regret. I really appreciate your help, can give the house as we would be grateful. Stretch your helping hand to help our family life in the most difficult period.
We look forward to your early for us to solve the house, thank you very much!

Answer 4

Dear manager:

This is my tears to you to write the second letter. My husband, 45 years old, advanced lung cancer, surgery,
Chemotherapy, and serious illness to his days feel like years, he was lying in a day, only 8 square meters of both cold and wet
Room, suffer unbearable pain.
We now live in appalling conditions, the landlord put the house less than 70 square meters with a wooden partition separated into 7
Rooms, the house is very old, the roof leaks, the room a variety of insect breeding, insect bite often
Bite. We are a 3 and 7 other people live together, very loud, next door to watch television, telephone,
Internet, go to sleep playing intoxicated voices heard and all very clear. He could not rest, can not sleep, illness
Dramatically increased.
We urgently need to leave here, we are through an intermediary company, the Internet looking for an apartment, a little distance from the hospital near
Where rents were high, we can not afford.
Now we are to suffer great sorrow in life. He was still young, he wanted life, he did not want too
Soon left his wife, children, families, his last moments in life you feel the temperature
Warm. I know that many people need a house, but not necessarily like us much. I urge
Your possible case, the actual situation according to our care for the most favorable, if
You can not give us special attention, so perhaps when he bid farewell to this world not something to
To the house, this will be his lifelong regret. I am very grateful for your help, as soon as possible to the house I
We would be grateful. Extend a helping hand to help our family through the life far the most difficult
Period.
We look forward to your early settlement house for us, thanks!

Answer 5

Respect the manager:

This is my tears to your second letter writing. My husband, 45, lung cancer, surgery, chemotherapy and late that he seems like a serious illness, he lay in a only 8 square meters is cold and damp room, endure unbearable pain.
We now living conditions, the landlord to extreme shortage of 70 square meters with wooden clapboard houses became 7 rooms, every house was very old, and the roof leak, room, often by various insect insect bites. We three mouth and other seven people live together, very noisy, watching TV, Internet, sleeping dozen phone, open and all hear clearly. He cannot rest, can't sleep, illness sharply increase.
We urgently need to leave here, we through the intermediary company, looking for a house near the hospital where a distance, we have no ability to rent is expensive.
Now we are under the life of great sorrow. He is young, he lives, he didn't want to leave him prematurely, wife, children, and families, he lives in the last time you felt the warmth. I know many of the house, but we not necessarily like so many. I urge you probably circumstances, can according to the actual situation of our most favorable to take care of, if you don't give us the special care, so maybe in his farewell to the world haven't got the house, this will be his lifelong regret. I really appreciate your help, can give the house as we would be grateful. Stretch your helping hand to help our family life in the most difficult period.
We look forward to your early for us to solve the house, thank you very much! E,

Answer 6

机译的好明显......