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IHaveaDreamEveryonehashisdream.Mydreamistobeadoctor.Asweallknow,doctorscansavepeople,...
I Have a Dream
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. As we all know, doctors can save people,s lives. They are noble and selfless. They are called ‘Angle in White'. They're the great in my heart. So I wish to be a doctor. To make my dreams come true, I'm determined to study hard. If my dream come true, I will be hard working to my work. I'm sure my dream will be come true. 展开
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. As we all know, doctors can save people,s lives. They are noble and selfless. They are called ‘Angle in White'. They're the great in my heart. So I wish to be a doctor. To make my dreams come true, I'm determined to study hard. If my dream come true, I will be hard working to my work. I'm sure my dream will be come true. 展开
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I Have a Dream
Everyone has different dreams.My dream is to be a doctor.As we all know, doctors can help people. They are noble and selfless.They are called ‘Angle in White'.And they're the greatest in my heart. So I hope that I can try my best to be a doctor. My dream will come true.No pains ,No gains.From now on ,I will study hard. Believe myself,I will succeed .
Everyone has different dreams.My dream is to be a doctor.As we all know, doctors can help people. They are noble and selfless.They are called ‘Angle in White'.And they're the greatest in my heart. So I hope that I can try my best to be a doctor. My dream will come true.No pains ,No gains.From now on ,I will study hard. Believe myself,I will succeed .
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