Question

短文改错 （英文）

1.Besides its scenery,you must have heard stories passed down from generation.one of it is the story about Lady white and Mr.xu xian ,that adds the colour of romance to the west lake .but unfoutunately ,the tower is called leifeng Tower was ruined in 1924
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Answer 1

Besides its scenery,you must have heard stories passed down from generation.one of it is the story about Lady White and Mr.Xu Xian ,that(改为which引导非限定性定语从句) adds the colour of romance to the West Lake .But unfoutunately (拼写有问题,不知道是不是你打错了unfortunately) ,the tower (这里加个that) is called Leifeng Tower was ruined in 1924

大小写算么? 人名首字母需要大写, 句子开头的第一个字母也要大写.

Answer 2

Besides its scenery,you must have heard （加the）stories passed down from generation（加to generation ）.one of （which） is the story about Lady white and Mr.xu xian ,（which） adds the colour of romance to the west lake .but unfoutunately ,the tower (is去掉 )called leifeng Tower was ruined in 1924

Answer 3

Besides-Because,
scenery-secret,
one of it -one of them
that-which
the tower is called -the tower called