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今天一早
我跟著我的educator带著孩子们一起坐在地上剥玉米的叶子
孩子们都很兴奋的用力拔著玉米的叶子,不停的拔直到看见黄色的玉米
我相信通过这样的活动 孩子们也可以从中获得乐趣和学到东西
因为下午会有一个很大的活动,必须用到玉米
所以才让孩子们帮忙拔玉米

之後做完活动,我们就准备好出去外面散步了
我和我的educator 带著孩子们去公园玩
每到去公园的时刻 孩子们都特别兴奋和开心
因为他们最喜欢去公园玩了
在散步去公园的路途中 我会问孩子们一些问题并且唱歌给他们听
他们都好高兴
也因为这样 我和孩子们的关系也越来越接近,越来越好
每次带孩子去外面散步到公园玩 是我最喜欢的时刻 因为可以和孩子们有很棒的时间一起玩

玩完之後 我们就散步回去教室了
之後大概下午要四点 我们带孩子出去daycare的外面
Daycare 外面的停车场已经都布置好了

这时的我才发现 原来我们今天要和家长们一起在外面做活动阿
我的coordinator 准备了烤好的玉米 要发给孩子们
孩子们排队去领玉米,然後去准备好的位置上吃
孩子们都吃得很高兴 可能是因为自己剥的玉米的关系
後来的时间 我们就在外面和孩子以及他们的家长互动
真是热闹极了 有点像派对的感觉

通过这样的大型活动
我们不但可以和家长们有交流
也可以让孩子感到很享受在这样的气氛当中

今天真的是个很棒的一天
希望下次能有这样的时间 和家长以及孩子们一起做活动

Answer 1

今天一早
我跟著我的educator带著孩子们一起坐在地上剥玉米的叶子
At morning, my educator and I brought kids to peel corns while sitting on the ground.
孩子们都很兴奋的用力拔著玉米的叶子,不停的拔直到看见黄色的玉米
All kids are very exciting to peel the corns, until they see the yellow part.
我相信通过这样的活动 孩子们也可以从中获得乐趣和学到东西
I believe children will have fun and learn something from this kind of activity.
因为下午会有一个很大的活动,必须用到玉米
所以才让孩子们帮忙拔玉米
A great event will be held at this afternoon, which need to use corns, so kids are helping us to peel corns.
之後做完活动,我们就准备好出去外面散步了
After finished this activity, we are ready to take a walk outside.
我和我的educator 带著孩子们去公园玩
My educator and I took kids to play at local park.
每到去公园的时刻 孩子们都特别兴奋和开心
Kids are very exciting and happy while playing at the park.
因为他们最喜欢去公园玩了
Because they like playing at the park.
在散步去公园的路途中 我会问孩子们一些问题并且唱歌给他们听
On the way to park, I will ask kids questions and sing songs to them.
他们都好高兴
All of them are very happy.

也因为这样 我和孩子们的关系也越来越接近,越来越好
每次带孩子去外面散步到公园玩 是我最喜欢的时刻 因为可以和孩子们有很棒的时间一起玩
Because of that, our relationship with kids are becoming better.
It is the best moment for me while taking a walk with kids in the park, and have fun with them.

玩完之後 我们就散步回去教室了
之後大概下午要四点 我们带孩子出去daycare的外面
Daycare 外面的停车场已经都布置好了
After fun time, we walked back to classroom.
I took kids to outside of daycare around 4:00PM, everything is set in the parking lot outside daycare center.

这时的我才发现 原来我们今天要和家长们一起在外面做活动阿
我的coordinator 准备了烤好的玉米 要发给孩子们
孩子们排队去领玉米,然後去准备好的位置上吃
孩子们都吃得很高兴 可能是因为自己剥的玉米的关系
後来的时间 我们就在外面和孩子以及他们的家长互动
真是热闹极了 有点像派对的感觉
Later we realize there will be an outside activity with parents.
My coordinator have prepared baked corns and deliver to kids.
After forming a line to get corns, all kids sit on their own chairs to eat.
They are very happy to eat the corns because all corns are peeled by them.
We spent rest of the time with kids and parents for interaction.
It is like a real party with tons of funs.
通过这样的大型活动
我们不但可以和家长们有交流
也可以让孩子感到很享受在这样的气氛当中
Throught such activity, parents can chat with us, and kids can also enjoy the fun time together too.
今天真的是个很棒的一天
希望下次能有这样的时间 和家长以及孩子们一起做活动
What a wonderful day we have today!
Hoping we can have another fun activity together with parents and kids in the future.

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Answer 2

Today early in the morning
With me as I took the children to sit down on the ground corn leaves
The kids are so excited pulled the corn leaves, and kept until see yellow corn
I believe that through such activities The children can also be fun and learn
Because the afternoon there will be a great event, must use corn
So just let the kids help pull corn

After finished the activity, we are ready to go out for a walk outside
As and I took the children to play in the park
Every moment of to go to the park Children are so excited and happy
Because they love to play in the park
Walking on the way to the park I will ask the children some questions and sing to them
They are very happy
Also because of this I and the children of the relationship is becoming more and more close, more and more good
Each
time with the children go outside for a walk to the park to play is my
favorite moment Because you can play with the children have a great time

After finishing We'll walk back to the classroom
After about to four o 'clock in the afternoon We took the kids out to the outside of the daycare
Daycare parking lot has been decorated

At this moment I discovered The original today we're going to do outside activities with the parents
I prepared baked corn to the coordinator to children
The children lined up to get corn, then go to prepare a good position
The children all eat very happy May be because their relations strip of corn
The later time We are on the outside and the interaction of children and their parents
It's very noisy Feel a bit like a party

Through such big events
We not only can communicate with parents have
Also can let the child feel very enjoy in the atmosphere

Today is really a great day
Hope next time can have such time and parents and children do activities together